The daughter of grayfia and sirzechs

The daughter of grayfia and sirzechs

Fantasy9 Chapters36.2K Views
Author: Darkened_Pikachu
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There is no formatting. I will continue the review in the same manner... With no formatting the story blends together there are no stops or commas between sentences which is frankly a disturbing read The story follows the usual neglect route with maids taking it further and needing killing whilst the mc gains a system with thousands of unformatted skills and abilities displayed in a simular manner Before you know it nasuverse servants and their other class role variations are breeding with eachother to mix up a brand new version of say Artoria Pendragon that has all the skills and abilities of all her other class card variations Things get more and more freaky from there and the lack of formatting doesnt really help much but had it been there then I would have been able to give the story a higher rating

4 years ago
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