Better Luck Next Time, Sugar

Better Luck Next Time, Sugar

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Author: mlevinthal
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Sera didn’t believe in the afterlife, not Heaven or Hell, or reincarnation or rebirth. Dead is dead. She didn’t believe in magic, she believed in science. Nor, after twenty-some years of marriage to a cheating liar, did she believe in True Love.



Until she was murdered by a rogue immortal possessing the body of one of Sera’s coworkers.



Then she found out there IS an afterlife. And it is very, very boring.



Luckily for Sera, she got a second chance to live. But it’s not her body. Or her world. All she has is guide her the words, “Try not to die.”



Well, obviously.



That would be a lot easier if someone hadn’t hired an assassin to kill this body. And if she wasn’t being hunted by a disturbingly attractive immortal who’s mistaken Sera for her own murderer.

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Its early but this story is a bit of a tough read which sort of explains the lack of comments and absence of ratings. Reason, as a reader you have yet to understand what the story is about or the reasoning behind some of the characters actions. At this point the reader is not really clear, we do know who the FL is but her purpose, transmigration and her character is unclear. As for the ML, I'm not sure if it is him as for the most part he's the only male character identified at this point. So I have no opinion per se. I'll stay up to chapter 15, but if I'm still struggling the story will have a short shelf life. Good luck author with the story you are trying to tell.

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