your writing has flow.
the characters are welcome described.
but synopsis needs work.
it's just a single but there is no denying it's intriguing but readers like to read synopsis before reading the book.
overall great read 🧡
4 years ago
1
xAlexiax
The synopsis is intriguing and the start is really interesting 😊 it pulls you in from the first chapter.
The world background is imaginative.
keep up the great work author! 📚
4 years ago
1
Shianne_De_Kock
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
4 years ago
1
Sadistangel026
The story was nice I do love true to life story you can really relate to it. I would like to know more about what will happen to the end. Good job author
4 years ago
0
Linden_Nkabinde
This is a great read, well written and story plot on point. I really hope that alex will one day learn to stand up for himself, he doesn't deserve the ill treatment he gets from people he's such sweet guy. Nice one author, keep it up. I recommend everyone to give it a try.
4 years ago
0
Laurie_Lae26
For someone who has meant an angel, I can't wait to read this. Just on chapter one but already feel the greatness. This is a beautiful piece. 👌👌👌👌👌
your writing has flow. the characters are welcome described. but synopsis needs work. it's just a single but there is no denying it's intriguing but readers like to read synopsis before reading the book. overall great read 🧡
The synopsis is intriguing and the start is really interesting 😊 it pulls you in from the first chapter. The world background is imaginative. keep up the great work author! 📚
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
The story was nice I do love true to life story you can really relate to it. I would like to know more about what will happen to the end. Good job author
This is a great read, well written and story plot on point. I really hope that alex will one day learn to stand up for himself, he doesn't deserve the ill treatment he gets from people he's such sweet guy. Nice one author, keep it up. I recommend everyone to give it a try.
For someone who has meant an angel, I can't wait to read this. Just on chapter one but already feel the greatness. This is a beautiful piece. 👌👌👌👌👌