"Hey listen you two. I was thinking about it for like 20 minutes. But the only solution for this is to decode the code. Only that will help us understand what is actually going on. Also, I guess we should read some files over here for background info you know. It will help us understand everything better. So I say let's go and sleep now. Act normal and then I have a plan......;
Aidan Dankworth always dreamt of going on the world tour but he never dreamt that he would travel the world to accomplish some secret missions.
Aidan, Madison, and Braylon are traveling the world in disguise to accomplish a secret rescue mission which they guessed was not even for them.
The timeline of the story is nice. The way you describe events is also good. But I think you should update more often. Because that would attract a looot of readers.
It is a very good story. I like the plot and how there are some twists in it. But I think you should update it more often. Also, the theme is cool. I really am waiting for the grand finale of this book. You are doing a good job. Keep it up!!