Fated
*****Warning: this book contains mature content which may not be suitable for younger audience.
Elena Lockser didn't know who she was until she encounters Aiden Crook.
Aiden Crook never believes in a second chance at love until Elena walked through his office.
As soon as we stepped into the living room, I breathed out deeply and gazed at him.
"I meant, I want to go back to Renee, to my friend." I said.
"You are not going anywhere." He stated calmly as if afraid he would lose his temper anytime soon.
"You can't tell me to stay here. I don't know you. I don't know what you are. I don't know if I would be your next prey. Please just let me go in peace, please." I didn't realize I was crying until I tasted the saltiness of the tears.
"Shut up, I don't want to lose my temper here." He pinched the bridge of his nose, before exhaling slowly. His broad shoulder moved with each breath he took.
"Why are you detaining me here? Do you want to kill me? Who are you?"
"So many questions in a sentence." He tutted.
"Just tell me who you are and why are you keeping me here? I want to fucking know!"
Aiden stared at me with uncertainty before stepping towards me.
I scurried back, slamming into the door.
He pushed me to it violently and I winced in pain at the force. His eyes flickered from the blue it was to a golden yellow and a fang appeared in place of his canine.
I shrieked as he continued pressing his elbow in my neck.
"This is me, sweetness and you are fated to be with me don't forget that. You are to be my Luna!"
Your Descriptions are on point. How you introduced the characters is impressive and what I liked most was the vivid picture your Descriptions made in my mind. I like the plot so far and the leads. Looking forward to more chapters
Wow!!!....from the synopsis and the first few chapters I read, all I can say is Excellent 🙌🏽🙌🏽.... its so captivating and the storyline is really catchy😃...kudos to the author🙌🏽...can't wait for more update.
The author has a very extraordinary standpoint and interesting background. The novel was very absorbing and made me read the whole. keep it up!
The story is very smooth to read. I like it is very descriptive and I can relate to the male lead very well 😊 Very good story, highly recommended!
I love everything about the story, this book certainly deserves an award. I love how the book makes me addictive and I also love the story development together with the writing quality.
This story is a great read. The Characters especially the female lead has their unique character which you could easily emphasize and enjoy with. The Narratives too are clear and can be perceived by the readers well. World Background is written well. Story Development, not fast pace and develop well. Overall this story is a great read and addition to my collections. Greatly recommended. Great work author.
can someone tell me the order of the chapters so I can read it without getting confused because the chapters are not in order!! so far it's a great read but it's making me mad when I go to the next chapter and it has nothing to do with what I just read or it's 2 of the same chapter!
Duplicate chapters, missing chapters. The storyline is hard to follow and honestly boring... It could have been more descriptive and followed a more interesting plot. There was plenty of opening for more indepth writing but fell short each time.
chapters were all over the place and out of order characters and story was decent story was a little abrupt with the progress and ending could have lengthened out to give more depth to the story and characters
Great story! I liked how both people's pov has been described in chapters. The storyline is very interesting and detailed oriented. I am hooked and will be waiting for more updates. All the best and good luck
From the synopsis to the very first chapter, you are drawn in. The description is on point, you’ll get the picture of every thing going on as you read on. It’s watching a movie while reading. Really good . A job weldone author 👍👍
Hello everyone, thank you for the honest review you left on this book, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. More chapters to come and I hope you continue reading it.
The start was awesome and the synopsis was very hooking. I am utterly speechless in the novel that I have read. This needs more exposure in the future for it to have big views! The author was talented and has potential so this novel was in good hands......from review swap.
This novel is addictive... the main character is a little thickheaded, but she's got nice reasons to be pissed. As for the other protagonist, there's a lot he's not telling. I won't spoil the surprise, but it is well worth a read. Can't wait to see how those two are going to handle that mess !
Wow 🤩. The novel is one of the most awesome novels I have ever read. The story idea, plot, theme and everything about the novel is 🔥🔥🔥🔥. Keep it up author, well done. I recommend this book💪💪💪💪