This collection of stories are about weird and mystery stories. Told in different forms some are weird and confusing and some are just straight up strange, but they are still stories so just enjoy them.
It was a new and fresh concept of writing. The world background was adequate, and, crystal clear. The whole novel was deep and understandable. keep it up, author!
4 years ago
1
Love_Nation
very interesting. and the fact that I love scary stories. this reminded me of black mirror. keep it up. is a new concept but I love it. I love the fact that you don't hide the weirdness, we people tend to enclose those sides hence those are what makes us who we are. nice work I'm inspired
3 years ago
0
Kendall_
As I have read the first chapter, I can say that it's damn scary! The flow of the story was good but it's kinda confusing like what you have said in the synopsis. Though it could be even better if you have put the proper quotation like (" ") and (.) 'coz their dialogue were getting lost. The readers might not have notice that the characters were already saying their lines. So as I have said, make it clear as much as possible. There were also some wrong spelling but it's fine tho. Overall it was good, that's all! Hope this feedback will help you improve your writing. Keep writing author!❤️
It was a new and fresh concept of writing. The world background was adequate, and, crystal clear. The whole novel was deep and understandable. keep it up, author!
very interesting. and the fact that I love scary stories. this reminded me of black mirror. keep it up. is a new concept but I love it. I love the fact that you don't hide the weirdness, we people tend to enclose those sides hence those are what makes us who we are. nice work I'm inspired
As I have read the first chapter, I can say that it's damn scary! The flow of the story was good but it's kinda confusing like what you have said in the synopsis. Though it could be even better if you have put the proper quotation like (" ") and (.) 'coz their dialogue were getting lost. The readers might not have notice that the characters were already saying their lines. So as I have said, make it clear as much as possible. There were also some wrong spelling but it's fine tho. Overall it was good, that's all! Hope this feedback will help you improve your writing. Keep writing author!❤️