When the frozen mountains burn, and the Frostcrown is shattered beyond recognition, a young man will awaken his Soulblade, and begin his long journey towards the pinnacle of swordsmanship.
It seems really good, not much go on right now, but it turn out to be good. I cant tell anything abou story development, but the character design seems Nice. A sarcastic main character is always great in my book. I dont know much about the World background, but it does have potential. There is a dew grammatical errors, but that Can always be changed. But in overall i Think it has potential and i am exited to read it further.
4 years ago
3
Troels_Nymark
Looks promesing looking foward to more chapters, the spelling is good and the story captivating, i espacially like the magic system at least so far.
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It seems really good, not much go on right now, but it turn out to be good. I cant tell anything abou story development, but the character design seems Nice. A sarcastic main character is always great in my book. I dont know much about the World background, but it does have potential. There is a dew grammatical errors, but that Can always be changed. But in overall i Think it has potential and i am exited to read it further.
Looks promesing looking foward to more chapters, the spelling is good and the story captivating, i espacially like the magic system at least so far. [img=recommend][img=recommend]