Heart's possession

Heart's possession

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Author: Glojade
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Battling the hurt of parent's painful divorce.Glory couldn't stay with either of them.She was offered a chance to escape by her Godmother to move to San Diego, California. Her Godmother then decides it then a damn good time to travel leaving her at the doorstep of the nextdoor. As Glory life unfolds in this new surroundings.She gained a best friend in Xander(one of Jorgia's twin brother), a couple of loyal friends,a heartrob,Xavier( Xander twin brother), who couldn't seem to reciprocate her feelings.The heart wants what it wants. In this case,her heart is his very own possession.

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itslikeametaphor
itslikeametaphor

The author has a flair for storytelling and it shows! The characters are well depicted and the setting is very believable. From the very first chapter you are hooked and want to know more! The grammar structure could be improved and I see a lot of potential in the author's writing! So give this story a read!

4 years ago
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_Aniv

Wow this is so good 👍. The opening of the chapter was vividly narrated. The Author intricately thought about the story and was heartwarming. I am pleased to meet such work and Kudos! Peace! ✌️

4 years ago
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yu_chan_desu
yu_chan_desu

i really love romance novels and this book is pretty amazing. the quality of writing does need a bit of work but it doesnt take much effort to understand the flow of the story. the author has done a marvelous job at the way the story is written. i just want to suggest maybe an edit for the first few chapters on the quotation and punctuation marks could do wonders as well as regular updates maybe once daily to gain more views :)

4 years ago
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JustLikeWriting777
JustLikeWriting777

I looove ur story! The plot is really interesting and i see that ur book has loads of potential! Thing is, i dont like this genre but ur book is something I can't miss! Consider me a fan :D I also adore the characters and can't wait to see what holds for them in the future!

4 years ago
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CodeyVanilla
CodeyVanilla

This is a work very well done. I love the relationship between Glory and Xavier, very intriguing and captivating. Well done to maria for her exceptional skills. This is definitely a masterpiece, good job author .

4 years ago
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goldenchild725
goldenchild725

It's not really my cup of tea, but it's good. Writing Quality: The writing quality needs some work. There were a lot of grammar and punctuation errors. Stability of Updates: I have nothing to say here. Story Development: It feels a little too rushed to me. Character Design: I do like Glory. World Background: I have nothing to say here.

4 years ago
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Tokio999
Tokio999

Good story tho, you have the potential to make a great story, keep me notified and good luck for you. Hope you'll maintain this great job author,

4 years ago
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The_Mad_Titan
The_Mad_Titan

I like how the characters were described, and the way they interacted. the first few chapters could use more length and more spacing tho. Good work author.

4 years ago
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Megana4
Megana4

After reading all 7 chapters, I would say that the author has done a fantastic job. I'm totally in love with Glory and Xavier...I can't wait to see them as a power couple...I love the conversations between Glory & Xander...and I truly loved Marie's matchmaking skills between the Main leads...The writing style & choice of words are well written and used...Looking forward to reading more chapters...Added to my library...Excellent work, Author!

4 years ago
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