The_River_Weaver

(I do not own the world this fanfiction is set in, nor the characters, nor anything else that you may or may not recognize. Those all belong to their rightful creators, which is not me.)
Since 200 years ago, there’s been a change in the world's current. What once was a controlled river has become a hurricane. There has been someone, something, in the shadows. Some say it’s a man, some say it’s a beast, and some even say it’s a group, but nobody has ever known who holds the daggers in the dark. Not until now. He’s back. He’s done hiding. The claws are coming out!

The Apex Predator (Young Justice)

This chapter is only necessary to read if you want more chapters. It tells of how you can get them, and how often they will get published.


Note, I make no money off of this, that would be illegal. So, what I can get from this is the chance to polish my writing style and use some creative ideas that are running around in my head. I already have an ending for this story in mind, which means it will most likely get finished. But you won't get that ending if I don't also get something.


What I want are reviews. Not the enthusiastic but unhelpful ones that always contain encouragement and misspelled words, but ones that can help me improve my craft and your enjoyment. I want some critiques, not hateful comments by people with nothing better to do, but actual critiques by actual readers that can help us both.


I will create one, maybe even 2, chapters a week. You will only get them when I get 7 good critiques on the previous chapter. By good critiques — I feel I must spell this out lest it be called unfair — I mean reviews, in the chapter comment section, on what you liked about that chapter, what you didn't like about it, things I could have done better, things I did that made my story stand out, and anything else that catches your attention. If your review doesn't contain at least one of the things I just mentioned, in at least slight detail, it will not count.


I appreciate you reading this, and I hope you like the chapters that lie ahead of you.


The Deal