Lady of the Lake

Lady of the Lake

Fantasy7 Chapters20.5K Views
Author: Xendres
4.76
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Two smugglers, hoping to pass unseen, ride in a boat through supposed 'cursed' waters. To pass the time Bo, a seasoned smuggler among other things tells the legend of a creature that lives in the lake, a humanoid creature with the fangs of a lion, the gills of a fish, the wings of an eagle, the poison of an Valudutti frog. The legend of the Lady of the Lake.



Duchess Elisia has set off with an escort to make amends with the past. Normally a quiet road, suddenly her carriage is brought to a standstill and a soldier informs her that someone blocks the road, asking for her by name. Someone, not normal...



Lady of the Lake, follows Duchess Elisia, through her set of trials and tribulations. Action-packed with slow tender moments of reflection, and perhaps even a bit of romance and drama. It's my first published project, even though I've been writing and reading for a while now. I will try to publish a chapter once a week, and would love to hear what you think in the reviews. Don't be fooled by the prologue, this is not a 'country' story.

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MicahDarkFantasy
MicahDarkFantasy

It’s definitely a captivating story that will leave many readers in awe and wonder. I love how the story develops with each new chapter, I love how the characters are very relatable, and I love how the background of this story’s world reflects on how much the characters will grow. Overall, I think it’s really good!

4 years ago
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Shianne_De_Kock
Shianne_De_Kock

Okay first of all the synopsis is actually truly amazing. It would definitely spark the interest of any viewer. Even the cover is awesome. I read the prologue and your writing style is dare I say ... perfect. I didnt spot any mistakes. I love how you stick to the way the characters talk, it placed me right into the whole sailors/country side vibe. The descriptions are awesome and just as a whole I can already tell that this is well written. Both characters seem interesting, I like how Bo's character (limited patience and that he gets bored easily) is portrayed. Sorry for spamming you. I highly recommend this book. [img=exp][img=recommend]

4 years ago
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djharvey24
djharvey24

Hey guys! Author here, just wanted to thank you for giving it a read! I'll try my best to update regularly and carry on this captivating novel!

4 years ago
3
loreenaces3
loreenaces3

I like the story. I like how the characters act. I like the heavy emotion of the story. And also the suspense that the author made in each chapter. Kudos to the author! I am hoping for more and waiting for the updates!

4 years ago
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Lola_Ben
Lola_Ben

The amazing description alone makes me love this story. The plot is very good. And the dialogues have me making voices in my head... hehe Please Author, update more, I want to know what happens next.

4 years ago
2
MildredIU
MildredIU

Wow, such a wonderful storyline! I have always been a fan of fantasy and this right here is so epic! Beautifully described characters and very well detailed. I love it! Great job author❤

4 years ago
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Craig_Watson
Craig_Watson

Minor grammar mistakes at the worst. The overall writing style is good. And the story progresses to the tale well and quickly. I'm curious as to what role the two smugglers will play in the actual story.

4 years ago
2
igb9nak5
igb9nak5

I think this story is really amazing it has everything in it, I really enjoyed reading is. It's hard to find books that interest me but this one is just an exception. I'm hoping on reading more fantastic chapters.

4 years ago
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Bb47520811
Bb47520811

It's a very nice book.The characters are very gracefully described,my favorite character is the duchess so far...I like her air of grace, she's strong in a lady like kinda way.Anyway the plot was well thought of and the prologue alone leaves you wondering what happens next I'll give it a 10 out of 10.The writing quality is very unique and understandable.Keep up the good work

4 years ago
2
not_sou_serious
not_sou_serious

Oh I love it! Storyline, the way it is described. The plots and the way the characters are explained and there dialogue all is just awesome. I would recommend this book to all and will be waiting for new updates for sure! All the best and best of luck 🍀

4 years ago
2
Dugzaw
Dugzaw

I need to give this work a pre review before my actual review. I can tell that this novel, and its author, will be succesful. Just from the synopsis and the prologue, it is easy to admit that you are a prolific and superb writer. I mean, the synopsis, so eerie and fantastical, does nothing BUT draw the reader in for more. The dialect and vivid descriptions in just the prologue make me feel like I have teleported to the era of smugglers and paranormal folklore. I commend your writing and have already added to library. You will be receiving more reviews soon. Great work.

4 years ago
2
TaintedMetal
TaintedMetal

Intriguing read so far. The flow is good, pacing as well, nothing is being rushed ahead. However I may need to see more before I can give a fully fledged review. You got a good foundation author, but I'd like to see more from this story. Keep doing what you're doing.

4 years ago
2
Megana4
Megana4

Very Interesting plot. By far the best fantasy book I have read till now. Kudos Author! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter... Very well written.

4 years ago
2
MUHACHE_JUMA
MUHACHE_JUMA

five stars for a beautiful mastery of language. if there were more I would give them all to you for the beautiful plot, picturesque description and wild other worldly imaginations. keep up the good work.more chapters please!😍

4 years ago
2
Deevine23
Deevine23

Wow...wow....wow....this author is really good,just reading the synopsis had me falling in love with this book,this author is unique and fascinating. Do keep it up author,I highly recommend this book to every reader

4 years ago
2