Mountain Painting

Mountain Painting

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Author: Sm_Mohan
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In ancient times the four Gods each chose a kingdom to lead the war against the Great Evil and together they defeated the Great Evil. After the Great War, the four kingdoms were blessed with the power of the four Gods. The Gods left the earth after the Great War.



Back then people used Chi Cultivation which is now illegal. Now they use God's power. But not everyone received the power of the Gods as a blessing. So, What will happen to those who did not receive the power of God as a blessing?  And why is Chi Cultivation illegal?



Legends tell us about a mysterious mountain painting. What is its power? Will it be able to change our hero's fate? Will it be able to change God's will?

[ This is my first time writing. Hope you guys will enjoy my work. Any type of criticism is appreciated.

And I do not own the copyright of the cover picture. ]

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Susan001
Susan001

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Masud_Shahriar
Masud_Shahriar

The story seems interesting but the lack of character and world details makes the story feel lacking. For a first story written, its actually quite good. Do give it a read!

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