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Archer Warrick: February 29th,20XX

Archer! Tillo! Get DOWN!

Eva’s voice ripped into my mind and near took control of my body. It wasn’t like she could use mind control or anything, but her sudden command on top of my already chaotic mental state made my body move.

The icy floor hurt as I slammed my entire body weight into it and I felt shards of glass bounce off my back. I wasn’t that close to the fracture, so I was better off than the criminal, but I still got a few cuts on my arm.

The fire extinguisher was heavy on my arms, and my elbows hurt from the impact to the ground. As soon as I’d heard Eva’s shout, I’d moved the extinguisher over my head as I fell, and my elbows and shoulders had taken most of the impact. I hoped they did not fracture, but the adrenaline that ran through my head made it hard to take an accurate scan of my body.