New Plan: DROPPED and SERIES SPOILERS
I'm going to recycle this story, so I want to keep my general plot structure and points secret. Sadly, that means this story will end while I will publish a new story without the Madara aspects. It will be an OC Douluo Fanfic as there weren't enough Naruto components for this.
This also means that I will only spoil the points which are unique to this story below instead of my full plot as I feel like that would be a waste. As there was someone who wanted me to keep the chapters up, I won't reuse this book(for those who don't know, an author cannot delete published works so many alternatively choose to take down the chapters and publish a new story in its place as it keeps the views and ratings. I won't though and will just write the story elsewhere.)
It was a fun run as my first fan-fic which is why it is a bit sad to drop it but as I looked further, I realized that he was quickly going to become an OC anyway, so why bother hurting my head cross-referencing Naruto and Douluo Dalu to make sure my facts were straight.
I'll show you what I mean as I tell you the Madara-related spoilers. (keeping the rest for another novel, as I said)
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- The protagonist(Madara/Xuan Feng) was a split soul fragment of Madara who took possession of the body instead of the original, who was forced into his mindspace.
- The true Madara was unable to forcefully takeover because doing so would be damaging a part of his own soul. Instead, he planned to slowly reintegrate the fragment into himself by slowly feeding it memories, before forcefully taking over when the soul of Xuan Feng was strong enough(Level50~).
- The black martial spirit was sage of six paths energy, which was constantly refining his body to make him a host for the rinnegan under Madara's influence, who began calling himself 'Zetsu' and pretended that he was a conscious martial spirit.
- When Xuan Feng went to Shrek he would recognize Tang San as Izuna, from his dreams under Madara's influence, who he would then watch over although he did not take Tang San as his brother, feeling scared of if he learns to hate once more.
- Xuan Feng would meet Wang Qiu'er who upon death, her appearance similar to Hu Meiqiu(who is missing for reasons I can't disclose), causes him to use Izanagi on her body and sacrifices an eye. Having lost his other eye from prior events(cannot disclose), Qiu'er uses her eye of destiny to evolve Xuan Feng's remaining eye to a rinnegan. This rinnegan has an ability in three stages, the final form being called 'Gingakei'(Galaxy) and working similar to Organon from World Trigger anime.
- Seeing this, Madara who was originally confused after his death at the hands of Zetsu as to whether his path was right, decided not to take over Xuan Feng upon seeing this and other displays. He wishes him luck in traversing this path
When I made the heroine poll, all the choices were possible for me. This led to many diverging paths as the Xiao Wu path versus the Qian Renxue path would naturally be different
This might surprise many of you, but I had Xuan Feng actually fight Tang San in more versions than getting along, as a kind of 'I see you as my brother, but I will show no mercy.'
- For example, in Xiao Wu path, Xuan Feng is the one who wants to revive Xiao Wu and duels Tang San over the flower in order to personally revive her and gain a +1 on Tang San who Xiao Wu leaned towards. All this for F#&$@&^ Xiao Wu, I still laugh to this day. Don't hate her but it's so pointless for her to be with anyone but Tang imo.
- Renxue path, he simply tells Tang San that he cannot let him and fights in place of Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue to the death. Bibi Dong attempts to kill him after he is injured, but is killed jointly by Xuan Feng and Qian Renxue. I haven't thought further from here as it was the 2nd most likely path, losing to the Hu Meiqiu & Wang Qiu'er paths.
These are the main points I recall.
I don't know how to end this but perhaps I'll leave a link to my new series once it is produced. Or, you can visit my other series which I plan to continue, also Douluo Dalu related. I have some outlines for Tales of Demons and Gods, DanMachi, Naruto, etc. but they are far away from completion.
I won't say that you do not have the rights to criticize me for dropping the series like so, but I also have the right to not care. To those who encouraged me to do as I felt, I am really grateful.
Time will tell what I'll do next... Goodbye, friends! ^_^/
P.S I'll add the first version of this story that only went to two chapters before revising in the next two chapters. This will show you how focusing on the details of Narutoverse had caused a drop in writing quality and thus, my own enjoyment.
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