啊大大哒

啊大大哒

Fantasy5 Chapters16.2K Views
Author: Sunny_Shad0w
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This story is Cancelled. as subject to feedback. If you are planning and invested to the Soulmark idea; please read either Intertwined: Summoned to Another World or Re: Souls

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DaoistP3Iu0i
DaoistP3Iu0i

Wow, love the novel. Writing is good, characters are good, main character is decent, and it’s just overall... a great novel. Looking forward to more.

4 years ago
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Detroittwo
Detroittwo

This is an amazing novel. There is so much going on, and wow. I love the wording and writing. I deeply like the magic in this novel. It’s so different and... eerily realistic. I love the characters already. I’m looking forward to more chapters, I will definitely add this to my collections. Keep writing author!

4 years ago
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okaynowwhatyouwant
okaynowwhatyouwant

I can’t explain how a measly four chapters from this novel can truly grab my interest. The writing is fantastic, and I love the first-person perspective. I adore how the characters feel alive, and even if they had little to no time to reveal themselves, I can just imagine and predict what will happen next. The magic system is greatly explained, and I personally think this story has true potential on becoming something greater. I highly recommend to you to read the first four chapters. I have been a fan of Jobless Reincarnation, and seeing that other’s are trying to follow the same concept, it really warms my heart. So far, there is no scenes I dislike, and I can just see this rising to the top. I am so eager to see both Daskin and Teriana growing up. But time will tell what would happen next. I hope this gets translated to different languages someday. This is a potential Scarlett if it continues where it’s going. Hopefully, this story gets more attention from the author.

4 years ago
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Sunny_Shad0w
Sunny_Shad0w

I really like how this story is turning out so far. I adore it so much, I might bring my attention to this novel, instead of the main one I was working on, This is just structured correctly. I might make most of the chapters in this story free, (if this ever gets attention from editors), with six months of writing experience, I slowly start a new story. I love Jobless Reincarnation, and so, I took inspiration from that novel. (Of course with very different Plot structure characters and magic.) I’m going to take my time with this novel instead of rushing it (like life.) Although Life May seem short, it’s simply long and expanding in reality. I want your feedback when it comes to this story. I’m working on this from scratch, and if I like the suggestions that the reader puts out in the chapters, I will most likely use that and add it to the story. Thanks for your interest <3

4 years ago
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