This novel is so good that I want to burn the novel and rant at the author for having poor writing quality. if this is a martial art novel then be sure to describe how the martial art is performed. This novel is still new so I shall spare the author of my ranting. I'll re-rate this novel if I see some improvements.
4 years ago
2
Juarez_Culau
The writing quality is very good so far, the chapters are long and de story is good till now, it's a good one for those who like systems novels. Now about the bad things, usually the big problems at the beginning of the novels are the insane dump of information, in this case, is the contrary, I think you should put more information about the world and the MC itself.
This novel is so good that I want to burn the novel and rant at the author for having poor writing quality. if this is a martial art novel then be sure to describe how the martial art is performed. This novel is still new so I shall spare the author of my ranting. I'll re-rate this novel if I see some improvements.
The writing quality is very good so far, the chapters are long and de story is good till now, it's a good one for those who like systems novels. Now about the bad things, usually the big problems at the beginning of the novels are the insane dump of information, in this case, is the contrary, I think you should put more information about the world and the MC itself.