It was a fabulous romantic short story and was so smoothly taken till the end. Keep on writing on many such perspectives! Personally I liked the way the story was made by the couple individually and was merged in the end...
4 years ago
2
Balla_Chalam
Nice one....Good story... I like it personally...story development is so lovable...good job... keep writing ✍.. All the best for your further writings.
4 years ago
1
Poseidon_284
The concept for the story was beautiful and the world building was very detailed. The characters were pretty good too. The choice of words were great but it could be polished more with practise. Overall, the whole story was a pleasant and wholesome experience.
It was a fabulous romantic short story and was so smoothly taken till the end. Keep on writing on many such perspectives! Personally I liked the way the story was made by the couple individually and was merged in the end...
Nice one....Good story... I like it personally...story development is so lovable...good job... keep writing ✍.. All the best for your further writings.
The concept for the story was beautiful and the world building was very detailed. The characters were pretty good too. The choice of words were great but it could be polished more with practise. Overall, the whole story was a pleasant and wholesome experience.