Long ago in Ancient China, during the Qing Dynasty, lived our main character Mei Ruby, who lives life happily with her werewolf pack as the daughter of the alpha. Until one day, she if forced to make a life-changing decision that will decide her fate. Now all on her own, how will she survive living in the palace of the empress and her heir!? Read to find what happens...
There aren't that many chapters yet but I'm waiting for this to pick up! Keep up the good work! ........................................................................
I think that the pacing is a bit too fast. It feels like the story is fragmented since it feels a bit awkward at some times, like when did she get comfortable enough to ask for help in Chapter 5-6. There's also that intimidating wall of text, maybe try to break the paragraph a few times. Aside from that, the story is good. I see some potential. Potential that I hope it will achieve someday.
The story is interesting so far. There isn't much chapters so I cannot tell that early. Although I don't really like werewolves stories, this one was quite good. You can modify your synopsis to attract more readers. Good luck! [img=recommend]
I love your story. you really have a great idea. your writing style is unique and marvellous. your plot is really going well no doubt. keep it up. and I'm waiting for next.