Herculean Machine (Hiatus)

I absolutely love this book. It is not something I expected it to be. It is super thrilling with lots of impacts. I definitely recommend this book to all!!!!!

I boosted your novel to thousand views from three hundred....whooooo! that was so tiring! Anyways, This novel was so lit that I got chills! So freakin good and so awesome! More power to the writer's works and More inspiration to the creativity and imagination. All in all, a good read! Kudos and Peace ✌️

the story is good and makes the reader want to read more. but there are some issues which i think can be fixed easily. for example, the constant switching from third person narration to first person narration is confusing and keeps the readers away. another issue is the use of tenses. continuity of tense is very important in a story. inclusion of dialogue could also make it more interesting. i hope to see these improvements and the story become even more gripping than it is now.

This is a really enjoyable ride. Other than a few awkward changes from third to first person narration early on, I found this story to be extremely well-written and it moves at a cracking pace that will keep the reader glued to the screen. I love how the protagonist is just thrown into this surreal fictional world right from the start and has to discover how the world works alongside the reader. Definitely helps to connect the reader to the protagonist as they both share the confusion and learn about the system together. Some wild action and adventuring already, can't wait to see where the author takes this story. The possibilities are limitless.

There is a very cool story buried in here, but it is difficult to get it out due to the poor translation. The author has created a fascinating world, and I am interested in learning how it's going to develop over time.

Hello everybody, It's me, the author of this book. It's my first try towards writing a novel and will try my best to bring an error free and quality book. Just support me and don't hesitate to give me an honest review. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is the strangest and rarest novel I've seen in my life..... I love it.‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎

The story is intriguing but I would prefer the story to be in the first person point instead of the third person. The writing style is good. The author portrayed the main character very well. Keep up the good work, Author!