I would cut one star from writing quality. But since I am giving five stars in other chapters, I might just give five stars in writing quality.
This start is amazing, though some things are explained. It is a nice way to connect virtual reality with cultivation.
Waiting for more chapters.....
4 years ago
2
Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Don't mind the stars, read the review.
This novel is the third novel of the Eternal Series. It is a sci-fi cultivation, virtual world, novel filled with countless treasure and monster hunts.
This novel doesn't include a harem, and it is Power Couple-based novel. The main character seems mature but he is not. This novel will include Eastern plus Western myths with hundreds of sci-fi hypotheses.
Everything in this novel is fictional, so don't compare it with the outside world, even if it is real.
I'll re-write another review after two volumes. And even if you find it uninteresting in earlier chapters, give it a try until it's free. You might change your view.
4 years ago
3
Madyan_wani
Kudos to the writer. The plot is intriguing. The story can hook the readers. I hope to see more chapters in the future. More power to you. Fighting.
4 years ago
2
Resurgent
Reveal Spoiler
4 years ago
2
Bad_Totodile
Noice Story my friend...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
4 years ago
2
meixiaolian
the book is interesting enough. anytime the readers would be hooked with this. I love that its descriptive to make the readers imagine : ))
4 years ago
2
IlluminatedEclipse
The writing is good, updates come often and the background makes sense, although some stuff is hard to understand.
What I dont like is firstly, the cliché of the arrogant young masters. I cant seem to escape it no matter what I do. Besides, Its not the Middle Ages anymore. They should be at least a little smart.
Thats probably the main reason I left this book. Whenever there are young masters involved, the clichés follow.
4 years ago
1
joe_jothika
It's so cooll author . I really like it. Since I read just the first chapter, it's very interesting to continue my reading. Keep coming it. We are hear to support you.
4 years ago
1
Magic_
looks like a great novel that i will add to my library and check out when i get the chance..................................................
4 years ago
1
King_Of_Beast
Nice Story! Love the idea of cultivation but many things remained unexplained. Well, it has only seven chapters now, so I can not judge it. Waiting for more chapters
4 years ago
1
Sandhya_Rijal
Amazing novel ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️. You can give it a try, I'm sure it will satisfy any virtual world lover. The starting is rather sad but romantic
4 years ago
1
Destiny_Aitsuji
Good luck author! Nice work!
For everyone else, this is a time wasting review swap. Still,any book written is a book with reading. Go ahead and give it a try!
4 years ago
1
Levies
Was this story dropped? If it is, then that was really sad I am reading all the eternal series by author I'm done with the first two..hope this will continue
3 years ago
0
Kaux_P
I loved the plot very much, it was a new experience. The writing is awesome. I learnt many things from your work. I'll look forward to your next update.
4 years ago
0
yanglin
Honestly. finishing 21 chapters in one shot is challenging, but "YES" I did it. Sci-Fi to it's best. As a writer who aimed to make my book Sci-Fi as well, this is a good read.
At first, the Matrioshka Brain really make my brain fried a little as I am getting too used to Chinese-style Pin-yin Novels. Suddenly introduced to a new name made me stunned for a moment there.
The story is written carefully with good consideration on the plot itself. I won't get deep into the story, but in my opinion, this is a good read. There was a hint of eastern fantasy and western fantasy mixed together, which makes this book seems better in overall quality.
Good luck in the Webnovel Spirity Award contest. Let's keep writing and I'll keep this book in my collection for my reference and motivation too.
And shameless self-advertising. This is Yanglin, writer of Legendary Orc Craftsman, Supreme Emperor of Mist, and Dimensional Store System in Apocalypse. If you're reading my review about Sabin's amazing Story, might as well give my work a try too. Thank you, everyone!
I would cut one star from writing quality. But since I am giving five stars in other chapters, I might just give five stars in writing quality. This start is amazing, though some things are explained. It is a nice way to connect virtual reality with cultivation. Waiting for more chapters.....
Don't mind the stars, read the review. This novel is the third novel of the Eternal Series. It is a sci-fi cultivation, virtual world, novel filled with countless treasure and monster hunts. This novel doesn't include a harem, and it is Power Couple-based novel. The main character seems mature but he is not. This novel will include Eastern plus Western myths with hundreds of sci-fi hypotheses. Everything in this novel is fictional, so don't compare it with the outside world, even if it is real. I'll re-write another review after two volumes. And even if you find it uninteresting in earlier chapters, give it a try until it's free. You might change your view.
Kudos to the writer. The plot is intriguing. The story can hook the readers. I hope to see more chapters in the future. More power to you. Fighting.
Reveal Spoiler
Noice Story my friend...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
the book is interesting enough. anytime the readers would be hooked with this. I love that its descriptive to make the readers imagine : ))
The writing is good, updates come often and the background makes sense, although some stuff is hard to understand. What I dont like is firstly, the cliché of the arrogant young masters. I cant seem to escape it no matter what I do. Besides, Its not the Middle Ages anymore. They should be at least a little smart. Thats probably the main reason I left this book. Whenever there are young masters involved, the clichés follow.
It's so cooll author . I really like it. Since I read just the first chapter, it's very interesting to continue my reading. Keep coming it. We are hear to support you.
looks like a great novel that i will add to my library and check out when i get the chance..................................................
Nice Story! Love the idea of cultivation but many things remained unexplained. Well, it has only seven chapters now, so I can not judge it. Waiting for more chapters
Amazing novel ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️. You can give it a try, I'm sure it will satisfy any virtual world lover. The starting is rather sad but romantic
Good luck author! Nice work! For everyone else, this is a time wasting review swap. Still,any book written is a book with reading. Go ahead and give it a try!
Was this story dropped? If it is, then that was really sad I am reading all the eternal series by author I'm done with the first two..hope this will continue
I loved the plot very much, it was a new experience. The writing is awesome. I learnt many things from your work. I'll look forward to your next update.
Honestly. finishing 21 chapters in one shot is challenging, but "YES" I did it. Sci-Fi to it's best. As a writer who aimed to make my book Sci-Fi as well, this is a good read. At first, the Matrioshka Brain really make my brain fried a little as I am getting too used to Chinese-style Pin-yin Novels. Suddenly introduced to a new name made me stunned for a moment there. The story is written carefully with good consideration on the plot itself. I won't get deep into the story, but in my opinion, this is a good read. There was a hint of eastern fantasy and western fantasy mixed together, which makes this book seems better in overall quality. Good luck in the Webnovel Spirity Award contest. Let's keep writing and I'll keep this book in my collection for my reference and motivation too. And shameless self-advertising. This is Yanglin, writer of Legendary Orc Craftsman, Supreme Emperor of Mist, and Dimensional Store System in Apocalypse. If you're reading my review about Sabin's amazing Story, might as well give my work a try too. Thank you, everyone!