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I hope you all enjoy the novel. This novel will have a lot of gore and abusive scenes. Unideal Topics, taboo topics. So beware if you don't like such things, this novel is just not for you. For the ones who have no problem whatsoever, you can enjoy the story further. :) Keep supporting to motivate me.

Wow. It's rare for me to say this, but got me intrigued right after the second chapter. I often dislike too much action in first chapters, but this novel is an exception. I am adding it to my collection! keep it up author and don't mess up along the way!

Good work and a great plot. don't be lazy.. your writing was so good so give it time to make it more suitable for readers...lots of love keep writing...😌😌😌

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Finally, I can read something like this. If you know you're a wimp, this book is gonna man you up or creep you out. Lol, I love the concept and the mc is just too good! (I mean BAD) Lol. All in all, it's a good novel!

This is a good read, the author writes well, and it is clear they hold great ambitions for the story, which is developing very nicely. Good job.

hello the story is awsome so far i really love it so far there have been no locked chapters so keep it that way okay now please keep up the super good work bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ps i am poor so i do not have money so i really need there to be no locked chapters super duper ultimate awsome ultra please bye for real this time ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hmmm. the most interstitial to me about this novel is the creation of the atmosphere that I thought was only prevalent in the first chapter but continued in the chapters after the supposed 'first prologue'. Props to the other for truly making the delinquent air available in the novel to ensure that the novel stayed true to its name... the characters are of an interesting choice, some not yet capitalised on yet...but they are coming on well, giving off the feeling of school kids...I appreciate that detail... the action could use some work, but at the same time I find that it fits the raw and brutish nature that I think would be best for such a setting of the novel.. perhaps it's just me... I enjoyed it so far...I rarely read novels with this kind of setting but I must say props to you author.. the writing quality is good... character design is coming along well.. can't give a full description when we're still so early... same for the world background... very good piece.... Write on READER-SAN!

While the pacing is good and there is nothing outright wrong about the writing style (can there be a wrong writing style hahaha?) I think that the action scenes in particular could benefit from packing more stuff in fewer words. It is hard to explain, but the fights and that stuff could come with a more tight approach, one that would take the reader by surprise. Otherwise a solid beginning, and the people in the story are real enough for me, and the general style is good.