Street Lights

So far so good. Each chapter is short but it is nicely written. This has a lot of potential for a book. WIll who is the protagonist of the story encounters a woman that wanted to kill him. Stuff happened, he got end up chased by the police.

Found the story on forum! I see a new writer but we all were new somebody, but your story has potential I hope you will not stop writing just bc you ain't getting response! All the best dear friend, the journey is too long but surely we will complete it!

Hi. It's your neighbor. I've read just 1 1/2 chapters because I'm in a rush. It's interesting. You lost me not because of the 'prologue' but because something is very confusing and 'lacking' in the middle of Chapter 2. Also, add spaces between the paragraphs to make the reading flow smoothly. It's a good trick to keep your readers reading. Your synopsis needs to reveal a bit more to caught the reader's attention. The cover is not stimulating enough, it's static and your story isn't. I like your writing style. You show, don't tell. It's gold. Good luck.

I like the story development and it's characters. I actually came from swap review and I got exactly what I wanted in a book. amazing[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Potential!!! The story started a little rough even the author said it, but it honestly just needed some more details. Aside from that, it really started picking up the more you read. It holds quite a bit of potential. I am looking forward to reading what happens next! (^///^)

The prologue was a little bit slow but things really picked up once I turned to the second chapter. It was a fun transition and you can really tell when things hit the fan. I'm glad that I took the time to check this novel out because it was worth it.

Great idea! And great writting skill! I should learn something from you. While reading I feel like I am a character of your book! If anyone is here to read then give it a try! I am sure you will love it! Keep up with your great thoughts and great skill! I really appreciate you!

honestly the book has so much potential! it was pretty interesting as well because the protagonist has the same name as my male lead in spirity so i was more than happy to have read the story out. i could only say that perhaps the paragraphs could be broken into several smaller paragraphs since most WN readers use the app and it could get confusing to read long paragraphs on such tiny screens. the book cover could use a change since the novel actually has lots of action going on. kudos to the author and i hope your novel rise up!

Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.

Ok, first of, this genre is one of my favorites and i could easily say that you managed to pull it off splendidly. I love Will's personality in everyway of course. A city filled with crime and corruption and then you have your super chill and cool main character right in the middle of the chaos. Oof- and the twisting point that came. Yep a fan. Apart from this i think your writing quality was incredibly balanced with the story. Also, the way everything is describes makes a person imagine quite vividly. I like this story deeply and I will definitely add it in my library. :D

Dear author, don't you DARE give up on this story! It's a warning😊 So, it's been the first three chapters I have read, but I am already dropping a review. Too soon, you think? Then you have not stumbled upon this beautifully crafted-lettered imagination. You! Yes you reading this, I urge you to read just the prologue and I can assure you that you won't regret picking up this book. Let's support this one as much as we can, I would love to see it get to the top. Let's do so alright! You did a great job, author. Keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I don't think the prologue sucked. It was slow but it wasn't the worst. I like when things start out slow and you nailed it. In my opinion anyways. Good job leading up to the action too. Keep it up.

Mystery. Crime. if that is to your liking, you will surely like this. The storytelling did it. It makes you feel that you're an accomplish of the ML. Very nicely written and won't get confused about what was happening~ Good job, Author. Keep it up!

Mystery. Crime. The storytelling did it. It makes you feel that you're an accomplish of the ML. Very nicely written and won't get confused about what was happening~ Good job, Author~ Gambare!