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Well damn. I saw the prologue after reading this but I'm definitely going to read that first before continuing I love the way the story unfolds so far but I feel I should the prologue first[img=recommend]

Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉 Dear new readers, please give this novel a chance and I assure you that you will be surprised in many ways! 🙏

Absolutely amazing. every single product was on point. you deserve more than five stars[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

Howdy! I read your story and a bit of your prologue so far. Ive got to say, chiefkiss. your writing style is very fluid and articulate and allows for so much creativity to flow onto the page. Your world is really cool and the concept of your main characters are great and original. I see you upload a lot so please dont stop haha!

Wow, wow, wow. I can't stop saying wow. This is beautifully written and some parts of the story made me imitate a tomato -cough- for a few moments. Of course, they were perfect for research purposes. The novel is good so far and there are a lot of details written. The author did a great job in writing this book.

The synopsis alone was an eye-opener. Chapter 1's use of "the man" or "the woman" was a welcome surprise, as the "he/she" description that most authors use when withholding character names can depersonalize the actions of characters, in my opinion. I felt like I got to know them by a nickname, instead of just by gender alone. Reading further, the writing is articulate and intriguing enough to make you want to keep reading!

Hi, I can't stop reading it. I have already added this to my library. Your writing style is what kept me hooked. It was worth reading. Happy writing! :)

Something original! Something new, here... I read it with pleasure! After a few chapters, I know where are you from :) I mean in the sense that I know what kind of books/movies you like, and I can see some influences... The plot is interesting, the characters also, the descriptions are nicely written! Gooood work!

Well, this is an interesting read. I can fully grasp the first few chapters of the story. It feels as if I am inside of the novel, watching their every bizarre movements. I really like it, and I can't wait to read more of this in the future~

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Simply wow! From the first chapter, I was swept off my feet! I would like to see a movie or an anime after this story. The author manages to make you feel like your actually there. Great job, and keep going!

This is my favorite Webnovel I've read so far! Super gripping, such professional writing I'd find it in a bookstore, but with the tight plotting, mystery, steamy scenes, and a hardcore "villainess" of my favorite manga, anime, and manwhas! I am going to stay abreast of all updates and root you on!

What is this? Why is this so great? Gotta read this one! it's very interesting! I was immediately hooked from the very first paragraph! Nice plot too! And the writing is so awesome! Overall it's freakin good!!

Great start to a great story. I like the author's style and the atmosphere that is created in the episodes. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.