Overlord Harem System
Look for this fanfic in fanfic section with the same name, I have started to update that one weekly.
Thank you for the support.
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A/N:There might slow progress in regard to romance but there is harem tag so It has some snu snu moments but not in the starting.
There are actions after certain chapters everyone pervert likes.
So don't be disappoint about it I will get there eventually as I am also man of culture...
The anime,novel or comics world which I will be using in this work will be those that are not adapted in fanfics much or not at all so look forward to it.
First world::Trinity Seven
Second world ::??(still not decided if you want to give your opinion on deciding the world then give comment on Reviev section).
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"I don't own anything except the Mc and some 'inserts' characters "
"I'm very novice in writing so tips or helping hand are welcomed"
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just for having the idea and creating a Story, I will support you author!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wow, the concept was amazing! I am deeply moved by my imaginative thoughts. I hope the author will update the initial chaps as they tend to be typo-heavy chap. As the other review swappers have said. Start your paragraphs with capital letters and end with periods or commas, question marks or exclamation. Comma if an active convo or period if it was the end of convo. Don't forget to also put (") quotation marks in the dialogues. Typos needed to be edited as soon as possible. 😉 Good luck with the spirity contest! I hope to see yours there!
Thanks for the chapters~~! Very good Author. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
This story development is quite good for novice writer If he can write like he is doing and improve it little bit it might become bit better what it is. Anyway It's just starting who knows it might come better with time.
I just started the ride and I must say that I am loving it honestly.
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don't!!!!! stop!!!!! releasing!!!!! because!!!! it's!!!!! good!!!!![[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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All characters other than mc stolen from anime/manga, story is a compilation of po*n system novel on this site and some other cliche system concepts. On top of that, the english is severely broken. Should probably use grammar checker instead of just google translate. To summerize: practically no effort or originality involved.
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the story was interesting, I loved the MC the fun was accurately poured into the story but there were grammatical and punctuation errors which I guess author has improved in further chapters Great work author
This novel is well written! The author creative ideas is excellent! Intersting synopsis and also exciting. Looking forward for more nice chapters, author!
The topic is totally unique. We don't usually find stories like this. But it's good and entertaining. Good luck, author! Keep up the good work!