Technically correct or pleasing to the ear?

"Because the motherfuckers inside that warehouse are holding Lecia captive," I dropped this huge bomb on her.

This should be way outside her expectations (would be both weird and epic if she did expect this revelation though).

「…What?」 Neia stupidly eked out.

Looks like she didn't. Sed.

"Yup, you heard that right. Lecia has been kidnapped, and the kidnappers have locked her inside that warehouse."

「Lecia?」

"Yes."

「Our Lecia?」

"I wouldn't exactly call her ours; she's not an object. The more correct term would be 'Lecia, the 13-year-old girl and the newest member of the New Dawn Guild who joined the core team on Azell, the Guild Master's recommendation'."

Wow, that was more like a full blown sentence.

Hmm, but 'more correct sentence' sounds weird, for some reason.

This begs the question; what should be chosen between technically correct statements and statements that sound pleasantly to the ear?