My Better Half (she's mine)
Kol locked eyes with her over his wine glass, she was as pretty as sin. He wanted her, he wanted to take her right there.
He could barely remember the last time he felt this strongly about any woman. What surprised him most was the fact that he didn't just want her body, he wanted her heart too.
But that won't be too difficult to get because since the first time she saw him, he's been able to make her heart flutter and her knees go weak. She wanted him this much even if she barely knew him.
They were created for each other. They've got ties and nothing could pull them apart. This was her belief.
This is a story of love between two people who were always meant to be together. But sadly, the surrounding misfortunes aimed at separating them pictures the opposite - that they were never meant to be.
Warning: this novel has mature contents. Reader's discretion advised.
Up to how much writer's writing style is okay but you can do better and the flow of the story is good too...the characters are good too and editing is done very well...All I can say is...all the best with your further updates!
Such a great story! Great plot and character design. I love the fact that the emotions portrayed felt real. Looking for a romance novel, I highly recommend. Though I'm no longer a fan of romance, I didn't mind checking this out, it was worthwhile. Keep it up. Author. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
This is a beautiful work. And as your first story I wish you good luck. It is a beautifully written romance novel, and the descriptions made me all warm and tingly inside. You're a good author.
This is such a great story...the characters are well described...the plotline is strong...author has done a great job with his 1st book...and congratulations 👏👏👏 keep up the good work...oh in my library too.
This story is amazing and it's probably one of the best romantic stories that I have probably read. When reading this I couldn't put my eyes down because it's that good. I'm sure that people who like romance will definitely enjoy it. I really recommend this story to everyone and I'm sure who will love it. Amazing work author.
First off, Imma compliments your cover book. It's so enchanting. Second of all, I love your story. It's quite nice. Good job, author. Keep on doing a good job. 💗💖💓
This is such a great book! I just read a few chaps and am impressed by the way this author started the first chap. (Author it's hard to believe that it's ur first book😅👍) Keep building up this book, it's fun.
I am rating this five stars because of the feelings I fet while reading the book, I want to know the characters more for I am hooked right away. Sometimes interesting characters are the ones that makes readers stay, and this book is one of them. truly deserving of 5 stars!
5/5 ((ΦωΦ)) First of all, great book cover (ΦωΦ) Second, good synopsis (=ΦｴΦ=) Third, I like how the author expresses the emotions of the characters, especially the lead guy. I feel like I am getting to know him well in just a few chaps (=^･ω･^)y＝ Fourth, the story is interesting! (ะ`・ω・´ะ) Just a little improvement on the punctuation, and it's gonna be be the best! Good job and please continue! (=^･ｪ･^=))ﾉ彡☆
Good job, author. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Yeees, the novel is so eye-catching and the way it attracts me is the same way the female lead attract the ML :3 I love it. Honestly would read this in my leisure time because I like the way it flows. Go go Author!
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this story is amazing. Especially the synopsis, I got hooked straight away. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I think it's great, you can really feel the authors passion for the novel. it's a bit sad that she only uploads once a week but hey, butter then nothing. But anyways, why are you here, you should just read it for yourself and form your own opinion.
Heavy drama and confrontations scenes as well as romance and more... I'll drop this review for the great effort of placing the story. The author will surely develop a writing style and own trademark soon. Continue writing and improving!