My World - The darkness within us
Are you really alone?
Are you really who you think you are?
Are you really in the right mind?
Are we not incomplete?
Are we not lacking?
Are we not weak?
Who are we really? Do you think the light is the only source of life?, why are you afraid of darkness?. are not they in cycle of life that can fix everything life created?. Why do we fear death as we love life. Why are you....
I am you within...
I am you...
I AM...
i...
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Heavy breathing* HA...HA...HA... EVERYTHING WOULD BOW DOWN TO ME.. DO YOU THINK YOU CAN WIN AGAINTS ME?!!!
NO ONE CAN ESCAPE FROM ME, NO ONE WOULD CAN HIDE FROM ME...
NO ONE CAN SURVICE... I AM.... ****
SOUND OF A GUN*
I WILL RETURN FROM DARKNESS AND I WILL RETURN TO NOTHING BUT, I AM THE NOTHINGNESS AND I AM THE DARKNESS WITHIN YOU.
I liked it a lot, I always like to read so I found your story very interesting, I really liked the characters in the story, I hope you can continue publishing more stories to continue reading
This author, even as a beginner, he/she managed to make a good story, an amazing plot and a creative imagination. The author just have to practice his grammatical errors and to compose properly his/her scenarios, but all in all, it's a good story to read and I know that the author has a lot of potential! Excellent!