Ravens of Eternity: Author's Notes

What? Inspired in Macross?! Count me in! Writing Quality - Excellent Updates - reliable Pace- Fast Character Design - MC, I'm still not much fond of her, but she is well described and has a consistent personality and noticeable quirks. Secondary characters are well described. World background - good Highlight - It has that classic space-opera vibe with action and mechas! Mechas! Did I say mechas?

Macross is one of my childhood favourite animes. The old school movies to the recent full episode animes. I love how it incorporates Music, Love, and most importantly, SPACE BATTLES AND MECHAS into a coherent story. I am soooooooooooooooooo looking forward to reading more of this. 5 stars!

One GIF- greatly woven, the tiniest of details have been defined, a great addition to one's library. I JUST WANT TO GO ON READING THIS !!!!!!

nive very nice theres great grammar and the story is godlike you can feel what the novel is trying to convey •_• perfection ()()()()()(()()

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

Nearly cried my eyes out from reading such raw talent. This is not even an exaggeration. My first time coming across this genre having a FL for an MC. Eva is so smart and courageous, I want to be her right now, but not in a Game-verse, xD. Now, take home: Author's grammar is professionally-biased(why? Her English is so 'god'). First book I'm reading in a while with zero to none GM errors. The description is solid and too good to be true. This is a must-keep in my library. Great book, great plot, and great job author.

It was a fun and a classic read of the isekai genre. I really love your choice for a book cover. I saw this book from before, so I feel delighted to give it a five star review! Kudos for the author~ The clothes reminded me of evangelion, and the introduction reminded me of the legendary mechanic~

SHAMELESS 5 STR REWIEW FROM A MERE PEASANT ps: I liked the novel :p‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎

I like this story. the charecter development so far is very good.I personally love this novel ,I have read the orginal from the beginning

THIIIIIS IS SOOOO GOOD! Female lead that is smart are my favorites! The prologue is intriguing. The author's narration is great, descriptive enough! I don't see any errors from reading it, I'm immersed even. Readers would be so hooked with this.

Woah... Felt like I logged into my brother's game..Vallorant.. and to the other one.. spacey and mech with suits and weapons.. That was nice... Different type since most of the story about transmigration to game are adventure and all... This was nice,,, Keep it up author~ Goodluck!

Great story with great talent! I have never seen such description about the plot's circumstances. Feeling great! I love this book! Keep it up dear author! I salute you!

DESERVES A FIVE STAR First of all I LOVE THE TITLE, I love how the way you write with no ERRORS. Your grammar is so clean. LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT ESPECIALLY YOUR MC! Great job Author!