BSD NOVELS
Author: bharvi_deshmukh
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it's a very good short story, but it needed to go a bit more in depth on story telling. perhaps you could make this into a mystery solving novel or a story about an old man telling his old and creepy stories but then there is going to be a little kid that disprove them