Undesired Power
Author: Trigonlol
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Alex Zuki, a half African-American and a half-Japanese kid moved to Japan where he is bullied for mistaking Anime to be the same as real-world Japan. Five years later, it is even harder to differentiate as he is thrown into a secret world dominated by superpowers and gains the ability to stop time.
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The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
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Total score - 4.6 The story premise and the hook are very nice, I have a feeling that it will be a very good story just with what is written so far. There are small problems with the writing such as words not being placed appropriately. But overall it is very good.