Yu Jin-Ho...a run-of-the-mill 26 year old finds himself involved in the world of Hunters and monsters.

With a bugged System in his hands...becoming the strongest Hunter might not be just a pipe dream...

Bugged System

The story most of the time feels like an info dump. Their interactions with other characters are not interesting and feel bland and feel robotic due to no emotion in their conversation. Character design is non-existent to barely existent. All are typical characters that have existed in many other similar stories. Some scenes don't make sense such as when the MC did something that should be beyond his capabilities the receptionist was just surprised but she should have been skeptical and tell the association to investigate. I mean it's not like there are that many hunters who are capable of doing the same. The scene where the guild leader became suddenly playful was out of place. His near nonchalant attitude is when he got the system was not natural. He was just a normal civilian and should have been more surprised and skeptical rather than instantaneously accepting. The story development well is very bad. He became a hunter capable of defeating an S rank in a few chapters. Also, why wasn't his rank updated? I mean to even fight with an S rank on somewhat equal footing should have improved his rank. Although he lost in the official match. He did fight equally and that should have at least made him an A-rank. The world background can be considered copying. There are literally hundreds of others with similar settings and this is not that different.

Author rather than the story first you should fix the way you write. Since the story currently feels like a info dump. So don't get discouraged but try to better yourself.

hmm... the world setting is very very typical. suddenly monsters come into world. most people die. but by the grace of God, system appears. those with system are called hunters. then a time skip to show that it is a normal now. MC who is jobless gets the system. so now he is on his path of the main character.
there is a lack of interesting side characters and interaction. author is new so he mostly explains what interaction he had in mind and skips it rather than us seeing the whole conversation. which doesn't let us know the character properly. I recommend taking cultivation online as a reference. it never skips a conversation which makes it so interesting.
and MC is getting too op too soon. it's like chapter 3 or 4, but he already is like s rank. slow progression is what makes us interested in his journey unless u have a very very interesting side or main plot. and him suddenly showing his arrogant side was very shocking to me. since it was first time he showed such side of him.
I see that you have concept and plot in a mind. I recommend setting some kind of goal or future plot point early so readers are excited about what's to come.
and to say it in one line, if this isn't your first time reading such a novel, you will find it very very familiar and kind of boring. though there is room for improvement. take it slow with every scene, and do less of exposition. take your time with it and don't explain everything at once. do it only when it is required. let us explore world slowly as we read

Hello guys author here...I just want to say that I am happy to write this book. I really hope to those who reads it will have a fun time reading☺