The Architect of Balance
The world operates on balance, that is the one rule of this world. Every person bounded by it's power has to maintain this status, no matter what. To protect this is why the people of the abyss exist. The special entities that are said to be neither alive nor dead, neither male nor female, they are their very own species, one entirely governed by magic. Asato is just the one next in line for the post of the Architect though.
But there are forces that want to create imbalance all over the world which do not bode well for anyone involved. From times even before Asato took over the post, forces of power had started to move already.
With the case of the latest body leading him down on a wild chase which starts more questions than it answers, the whole things start to get tangled into a mess which is happy to tangle itself even more as the time is passing by.
What does it bode for the world which is starting to loose it's balance?
The writer here. This is my second work so please bear with me since I'm fairly new. I hope you will enjoy this and leave me with feedback in return. I'll try to get out to you an entertaining story but keep reminding me or I might get busy in real life.
I forgot the tags #magic #secret identity #action #adventure #fantasy #magical animals #powers #family #war #soceity #Childtoadult #Videogame elements #betrayals Also, you might see some people with system so I'll tag #system but it may not come in play later. Way later though
I'm really interested. Especially MC's past which seems simple and yet not. Also, the side characters seems to have personality which I really need to see through. Especially that relationship
Hey, does 100 specify anything special or is it a random number? It really is interesting how it all came about but it was too abrupt. It feels like a buildup which I'm really curious to see. Please hurry with your chapters so that I can read more
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This is pretty interesting story. The story started with a way that would make you curious what is going to happen. Characters of the story are also interesting enough. A pretty nice fantasy novel if I say.
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I was not sure if I would like this since I came here from your other work which is in a completely different domain than this, but I feel to like this so I'll stick around. The concept is not something I've read till now so I'll stick around for more
Seems really interesting so far. I hope to see how you will develop it. Also, good lunch with the WPC that you entered. I'll add this for now and keep an eye on the development in a few days
Good story, really fun to read too. And by that What I mean to say is - Please update, it's been ages and you just up and left it on a cliff
I was sure I reviewed this before when I first read through but might as well do this again since I'm reading through. It's good and we'll written, though some parts gets confusing like the fire or powers. But I'll keep an eye out all the same
I'm really liking where you are taking this story and I really won't mind more of such stories out there. Can you update a little faster though? If that is not too much pressure on yo?
Please I want you to give me even more than this. This is really good and I'm looking forward to so much more. The thought of such a concept is not new but it is new how you executed this. Especially for me
I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the MC in your book as a young boy who had no reason to live until he died, The fact that he felt like an outcast in his own family made me feel sympathetic for the boy, The writing creates an image for me what it's like as I just stand there in every scene and seeing what it's like through the boys eyes. I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to future updates, well done and keep up the work.
Such a fun read. Don't burn yourself out but give us a steady updating schedule. As a loyal reader of your other workz I don't want you to delay that either