Be The Witness
Author: Shoujoeye
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This story is about a girl who is constantly receiving messages about forewarned crimes or killings in places she goes. She did not believe it the first she saw it until a certain murder happened in front of her and gone like nothing happened. One day a killer appeared and murdered her whole family as what she received then a mysterious man appeared in front of her and vanished together with the corpse.
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I think it has been a long time since my last mystery book. I didn't expect this book would have parallel world linked with the current situation. It seems like the messages were received to avoid catastrophe in the future even though some were unavoidable The idea is good. The only thing that bothers me is the constant changing of POVs. It kinds of distract my focus, other than that all is good Keep up the good work!
Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.
This story is riddled with untimely twists and inexpected turns! From the chapter titles, that almost carry the progression of the story on their backs, to the cover, everything about this novel is tightly wrapped together. I can only wait to read more!
The story is interesting and I liked the concept a lot. Writing style is good. The only issue I faced is the constant change of POV's which can distract the readers. It might get annoying as it kinda act like an obstacle while reading so maybe you could try changing that. Apart from that, this book has potential. Good work, Author!!