Mark Terra

Author note: I tried doing an emotional scene, hopefully it works, plz give any feedback so I can improve. ;)

Author note: Also, I have to go on a trip that my parents have dragged me on, so, I can't post for about 2 weeks, but after that its rapid fire.

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"SHIINEEEE!!"Mark yelled.

[Oh shit]

'Oh shit'

{Oh shit}

Astrid dogged to the left causing Mark to accidentally use his Petrification ability on the ground.

"Haha! You clumsy little shit! I don't know why I created you! You are such a failure!" Astrid said thinking that Mark was on a 1hr cooldown.

RumBLe!

Soon the earth started to quake. It moved like waves, then turned into spikes, then into a rigid shape, Mark had unlocked the second skill of his ability! Shape movement!

It was similar to a type of domain. Anything in the area he touches gets turned into a grey, stone-like, material which eats away at anything that it touches in a 5 meter radius for 4 seconds before completely turning it into stone. The shape movement skill allows the caster to move the stone-like material to whatever the owner wills it to.

"You are done Astrid the fat-ass Burrito King!" Mark said in a evil smile that emitted thick bloodlust.

[EWW! How dare he emit blood-LUST! Bloodlust originated from the beauty of the first Vampire Queen that was a friend of mine! She would not like seeing to used by peasants! Although you are a peasant too, since it is under my jurisdiction, I will allow you to hold its power!]

[You have met the requirements for a hidden trait, would you like it!]

'Yeah, his angry face is making me sick!' Astrid whispered in fear

[Good! You have been bestowed with (Vampire Queens Bloodlust)!]

[(Vampire Queens Bloodlust): Whenever you cast bloodlust, it is of the purest quality, able to scare anyone up to 1 rank above you. You are also able you completely ignore anyones bloodlust that is up to 1 rank above you. If bloodlust of someone higher than one rank above hits you, it will double in effectiveness. (Passive) (Upgradeable the more you rank up in class)]

'Nice, it is a double edged sword, but it won't make me sick anymore and it will make him sick, so hell yeah!' Astrid thought.

Astrid emitted his bloodlust, it was deep, like you just pissed off someone you shouldn't have. With Astrids own evil smile that looked like a pedofile, you would feel like you were about to get violated.

'Um, system, I feel uncomfortable?' Mark mentally sent a message to his system.

[You have trained so much and have gone through so much torture, so you should have a very deep bloodlust, but dis dude must have gone through hell and back, and with that smile, I would not even be suprised if he raped everyone on the way! Just retreat, I'm scared to battle him! He might mentaly rape me!]

'I have my honor on the line, I don't care about a pussy-ass bitch like you who is scared of a Burrito King for god's sake!' Mark thought before sending a bunch of cone like pillars straight to Astrid.

'Ah fuck, I'm on half mana, how many water punches is it gonna take Xiao Fen!'

{Looking at his body constitution, he has a strong body for a mortal, but it is too weak for your punch! You will kill him if he gets hit with Water Crushing Flow!}

'Fuck my life, if he kills me I'm dead, but if I kill him... I'm dead!' Astrid thought while thinking about his bucket list and how even if he survives this, he has only got around 2 weeks and 5 days to live.

Getting ready to dodge the pillars, the pillars suddenly stoped! It seemed that the pillars stopped at the 5 meter radius mark. So basically he had a domain that he could do anything in, but any further than that, and he would be powerless.

"What?" Mark blanked out, he didn't expect this.

He tried again, only be succumbed to the same result.

"Na man! System stop trolling!" Mark couldn't accept defeat.

[I ain't doing anything, it's just how it works man]

He sent another pillar but as if an invisible wall was their, it couldn't go through.

"BRO STOP! MAN I BEING HUMILIATED!"

[...]

He tried everything, breaking the chunks which caused his fingernails to be chipped and his hands to bleed, but it was too hard, the material of the Petrification System was the hardest known to man.

"GOD DAMMIT!" Mark said as he knelt down in defeat.

He had gone through so much, training his body from the age of three, fighting martial masters (Can't use that because of 'Dance till your Dead'), sitting in boiling water to strengthen his body, bear the harassment of his father, see his crying mother...

It was just too much for him too handle, he started to break down, crying, wiping his tears to stop drenching his shirt, but more just came. If he sustained bullying from his peers, he would not be able to handle it. He acted all high and mighty to prevent this, but in reality, be was just a broken child, lost in this ruthless world.

When Astrid saw this, he knew that the fighting was over. He walked over to comfort him.

[What are you doing man!]

'You truly are heartless man...' Astrid knew what this pain was like, being left alone in this world, it is too much of a person like him to bear.

{The Cultivation world is ruthless! This could be a trap!}

'Who fucking cares, I know what genuine and what's not, its not like you have ever felt what its like!'

{...} Xiao Fen was speechless.

WHOOSH!

When Astrid stepped into the domain, a spike it him in a shoulder. He grimaced in pain, but persevered.

CRACK!

Another one hit him in the arm, he still kept going.

After what seemed like a century of pain, which Astrid was used too, he reached Mark, and brought him out of the domain.

Once he reached Dawn and the group, Astrid said "H-Heal, him." before getting knocked out by the pain.

After about 1hr, Astrid woke up to see his injuries healed and no damage done to his body.

'What happened?' he asked the system

[Dawn and those people used a healing antidote on you... you know, that was really, heart warming... WAAAAA!]

'Fucking crybaby...' Astrid thought

Astrid found Dawn near a rock and said "Hey, how is he doing?"

"He is doing good... That was really brave, what you did I mean..." Dawn said while looking away while blushing.

[Dawn Wave Status: (Attracted) --> (Attracted +2)]

[Damn]

'Damn'

{Damn}

[Looks like you do have some good qualities afterall]

{Getting the girl that was attracted to me! Good job!} Xiao Fen said with a thumbs up.

'Lets friggin go!' Astrid was grinning with a pedofile smile on the outside.

[Dawn Wave Status: (Attracted +2) --> (Cautious)]

Dawn was worried, for her own body.

'God fucking dammit!'

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"I honestly thought that guy from the Terra family would cause destruction from his attitude, but was a crybaby on the inside! Not that I don't mind..." Nero said.

"That Astrid kid though, he has a fiery tongue though I do have to say that!" Yeti said with a surprised face.

"Yeah, their argument was very entertaining! But this is an exam, now that everyone has had the appetizer, time for the main course!" Nero said as he snapped his fingers.

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BOOM!