story of a very logical man reborn as Sakura Haruno (as a girl). It is going to be fun and interesting.
English is not my first language, there will be many, many silly mistakes (But it's readable, I think). I don't own Naruto or the cloak. I don't even know until when will I going to write, I'm just writing for fun
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Verry Good! The development of the scenario can improve. Still waiting for more updates. You could improve the chakra control abilities and reverse engineer the Rasengan.
quite an entertaining story, please author do not abandon it. ........................................................................................
На пока все супер жду продолжения! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's a good story. my only complaint is that it's short, but that can be fixed without a problem.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Muy buena historia lastima que parece que abamdonada. Coma hace mas de dos años una pena la verdad tiene un muy buen comienzo .............................................................. .................................................................................................