Lycan Knight (Marvel Fanfic)

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I am sorry man, I really tried to be as positive as I could. But your character has no emotional development whatsoever is extremely single-faceted. In other words boring. The story is generic and the amount of clichés go into double digits in just the first chapter. The plot is reasonably satisfactory and but so unrealistic that it makes me cringe from within. And no offense, but your grammar sucks. I am not hating on you or anything, in fact your ideas for fanfics are great. Even the Game of Thrones one had a relatively good idea. But your execution needs a lot of work if you want to make it big. Rushing the storyline years at a time in one chapter even if it's a flashback does more damage than good in the long-term. Good luck in your future endeavors.

Too early to actually critique but from what I've read this is a good story with a decent premise the only thing holding it back for real is its grammar as it's pretty weird, the flow of sentences is a big turnoff with multiple 'ands' with zero punctuation. Apart from that, I enjoyed everything else. Glad we didn't have to read 20 chapters about his time in the 1800s and instead got a long chapter summarizing his achievements. Hope you update more! I shall give my power stones whenever I can and hope you don't drop this. Good luck author-san!

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work

Love this story hope you write more in the future. wish I was there to support you when you started maybe it would have more chapters. anyways good story.

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