Amazing!!
As I expected that chap 2nd will be more interesting ...
So yup !!! It is interesting and now I am really curious for chap 3rd...
Nice chap👍👍
4 years ago
1
Mustafaa
That's so nicely done dude, to be very honest, I'm having a feeling that Shakesphere wrote it, Keep the great work up maann. This chapter is giving the vibes of Hamlet by Shakesphere
4 years ago
1
Mustafaa
Nice story development, hope you'll continue, the wordplay is really awesome and constructive, I will suggest increasing the length and add some major twists.
Good Luck!
4 years ago
1
Syeda_Farrukh
I really love to read these kind of novels and stories... I think the next part will be more interesting.
I am really excited to read the whole novel...
Hope the next chapter will publish soon.💜
4 years ago
1
syeda_fatimaa
Wow..!! I am amused by reading the first chapter .....
It seems so interesting and the title is also very good...
I am sure that this novel will be so excited for novel lovers...
Can't wait for next chapter...🥰
4 years ago
1
lemon_boy
Amazing start of a story great choice for world building can't wait for the next chapter Absolutely loved the first chapter i can see this story reaching a great hights
4 years ago
1
Ali_Haider_Khan
Hi
I am auther of this novel. I hope you are all enjoying my novel. I am new in novel writing so please show some love and support that will encourage me to write new novels for you alll.
4 years ago
0
lemon_boy
The follow up chapter is even more amazing i loved every bit of it i hope nothing bad happens to alex . Cuz he is such a loving and a caring father
Amazing!! As I expected that chap 2nd will be more interesting ... So yup !!! It is interesting and now I am really curious for chap 3rd... Nice chap👍👍
That's so nicely done dude, to be very honest, I'm having a feeling that Shakesphere wrote it, Keep the great work up maann. This chapter is giving the vibes of Hamlet by Shakesphere
Nice story development, hope you'll continue, the wordplay is really awesome and constructive, I will suggest increasing the length and add some major twists. Good Luck!
I really love to read these kind of novels and stories... I think the next part will be more interesting. I am really excited to read the whole novel... Hope the next chapter will publish soon.💜
Wow..!! I am amused by reading the first chapter ..... It seems so interesting and the title is also very good... I am sure that this novel will be so excited for novel lovers... Can't wait for next chapter...🥰
Amazing start of a story great choice for world building can't wait for the next chapter Absolutely loved the first chapter i can see this story reaching a great hights
Hi I am auther of this novel. I hope you are all enjoying my novel. I am new in novel writing so please show some love and support that will encourage me to write new novels for you alll.
The follow up chapter is even more amazing i loved every bit of it i hope nothing bad happens to alex . Cuz he is such a loving and a caring father