Hi, I am the author of this novel.
Please give me honest reviews and don't sugar coat your reviews, i don't mind criticism.
If you like this story please support me.
4 years ago
0
VRW1
You need to start double quotations and end with double quotations but you see that mistake and you change it mid way and also "space bar". Some the words is way to close to each other. I like the book cover and also the more you write the more you get better at it. So keep going.
4 years ago
1
Proteety_Promi
I like your writing style a lot! The way you started the story really is interesting. Though if you work hard on it and be careful about some points of the story, it will get better!
4 years ago
0
Bunny_Junnie
I like the book cover most😂. You have really great talent of writing so keep it up. This is a nice story but I think you should focus on punctuation and capital letters. Otherwise, this is going to be a great story. Though I couldn't read much, I like your writing style! Keep updating!
4 years ago
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Monarch_Of_Death
Very Informative that I felt like I could see those that being written at the book. (Maybe depends on the reader? However for me it is real)
The plot twist is a bit cliche` but I'm waiting for more improvement and new ideas in the book.
The thing I like that most about this book is the details for real, just like the body at the bloods of his own, that at the chapter two... 👻
More updates.
4 years ago
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Jo_J
A very original cover page! From the synopsis, I can see that you have a concept for your story. Have to admit it sounds interesting. I wonder how will you bear with the topic you chose for your story.
The two chapters and your synopsis need a proper edition.
Hi, I am the author of this novel. Please give me honest reviews and don't sugar coat your reviews, i don't mind criticism. If you like this story please support me.
You need to start double quotations and end with double quotations but you see that mistake and you change it mid way and also "space bar". Some the words is way to close to each other. I like the book cover and also the more you write the more you get better at it. So keep going.
I like your writing style a lot! The way you started the story really is interesting. Though if you work hard on it and be careful about some points of the story, it will get better!
I like the book cover most😂. You have really great talent of writing so keep it up. This is a nice story but I think you should focus on punctuation and capital letters. Otherwise, this is going to be a great story. Though I couldn't read much, I like your writing style! Keep updating!
Very Informative that I felt like I could see those that being written at the book. (Maybe depends on the reader? However for me it is real) The plot twist is a bit cliche` but I'm waiting for more improvement and new ideas in the book. The thing I like that most about this book is the details for real, just like the body at the bloods of his own, that at the chapter two... 👻 More updates.
A very original cover page! From the synopsis, I can see that you have a concept for your story. Have to admit it sounds interesting. I wonder how will you bear with the topic you chose for your story. The two chapters and your synopsis need a proper edition.