Immortal Desire
Only one cure, but two desperate souls. Can they be lovers? And who will sacrifice everything for the other to live?
A blood-sucking, beautiful, and heartless demon. That's how the humans would describe Fleur, one of the ancient vampire purebloods. Yet she longed for a way to cure her vampirism or to sate her growing hunger before her vampiric nature consumes her—and turns her into a mindless monster.
Crown prince Adrian—the troubled Emperor-to-be—has his own demons to fight with. Dying from a mysterious illness deemed incurable by both magic and divinity, he sets out to find a cure.
One desires mortality, while the other desires life.
Their fates cross when they join an expedition of heretics to explore Ladvin's Vault, said to hold the legendary Panacea, the cure of all their problems. But there’s only one cure. Who will gain what they desire at the end?
Will the spark of love be their salvation?
…Or will it be their ruin?
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If you are here for Lovey Dovey Romance? Sorry wrong book please try another. If you are here for some action and angst filled adventure with a side dish of horror, this is the book for you. Romance might come later... So stick to this book readers. Writing quality is one of the best I have read, even better than some TL groups. I might be biased because the Vampire's name is Fleur but the character so far is great! The author has almost regular updates. It's just three chapters, I can't say more. Read it yourself people.
OmG author I'm already loving the story from the beginning. I love how you describe their fights so precisely, and not making it boring. you story is so interesting but underated. I hope you can keep up with this good story
As someone who has read tonnes of vampire fics in their time, this is seriously impressive. Your grammar is pretty much flawless, occasional typos here and there, especially in the third chapter which I can point out to you. There isn't much of a problem with the style and paragraphing either however since we don't have italics in Inkstone, I believe you would benefit from adding single quotations or writing a character's thoughts in direct speech to make it clearer. While the first chapter sets the world well, suggesting that there's some sort of divide between the "Dead" and the humans, I think more needs to be mentioned specifically between the relationship of vampires and relationships as well as the significance of Ether. While it's fine that the FL likes to do things on a whim, there needs to be a core drive that she makes her so flippant, or some sort of reason that she's actually willing to go through all this trouble. Providing more information on her role would really help. Even with this criticism, I do think that this book is worth 5 stars. All the best and I look forward to more from you, Eph! :D
Good read. Language was easy to follow and the direction is clear. Obviously this is a story that takes its time to build up everything, and with 7 chapters at the moment, readers would have to be patient as the story grows up, including the characters and world, both of which could use more detail. There are potential elements of this book to be great, as it's current state of chapters is enough to tell me that this is a novel that stand out on its own, and doesn't follow the mega mainstream trends and style. Some parts of the book could be shown instead of told, but sometimes it can be best to go straight to the point. Just saying showing makes the reader imagine things more and it and make writing more impactful to a degree. Keep on writing, author.