Honestly not a bad first chapter, the writings ok and sort of feel like a pilot of sorts. The protagonist is an introvert but also just casually loots his dead peers without even understanding what has happened. I can't comment much on the story, plot, characters and world-building since there is only 1 chapter.
Honestly not a bad first chapter, the writings ok and sort of feel like a pilot of sorts. The protagonist is an introvert but also just casually loots his dead peers without even understanding what has happened. I can't comment much on the story, plot, characters and world-building since there is only 1 chapter.