I suddenly ended up here. I don't know how. Everything in my life is now a big mess. Once dreamt of living a peaceful life and now ended up in a mess. Different world, different story. Will I be able to survive this world?
It was soooo refreshing to read a book that has been well edited, with no grammatical errors or spelling errors, no mis-used words and a plot that flows smoothly with no inconsistencies! I've always loved books. Awesome love story.
4 years ago
3
Sinadin
This is a very well worked book. I truly loved your plot and am completely and genuinely saying that your writing skills are very good. The Only advice I can give you as a reader is please break down your words. The paragraphs are to be shortened. This is just an advice and I believe breaking down your paragraphs will help the reader to easily find words.
Right now your chapters seem a bit short and I think it might be because of the lack of ideas, you know... I myself have experienced that and what did I do, shorten my chapters. But it turned out good anyway as I kept on writing. And it will then out good too if you shorten a paragraph to 4 or 5 sentences.
Overall Awesome book and nice writing. Kudos Writer Vedha 🥂
4 years ago
2
tripti_lata
I love this story.... It is so lovable 😍.. every character of this story is very impressive[img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]..... 😍❤️😘🤗
4 years ago
2
nia_94
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4 years ago
1
Daoist8sBqdA
Words are enough to justify the emotions attached to this book what a lovely story d great lessons attached. I really wish best of luck to author[img=recommend]
4 years ago
1
Sinadin
HEY AUTHOR. Continue this.. You can't just drop it like that. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It was soooo refreshing to read a book that has been well edited, with no grammatical errors or spelling errors, no mis-used words and a plot that flows smoothly with no inconsistencies! I've always loved books. Awesome love story.
This is a very well worked book. I truly loved your plot and am completely and genuinely saying that your writing skills are very good. The Only advice I can give you as a reader is please break down your words. The paragraphs are to be shortened. This is just an advice and I believe breaking down your paragraphs will help the reader to easily find words. Right now your chapters seem a bit short and I think it might be because of the lack of ideas, you know... I myself have experienced that and what did I do, shorten my chapters. But it turned out good anyway as I kept on writing. And it will then out good too if you shorten a paragraph to 4 or 5 sentences. Overall Awesome book and nice writing. Kudos Writer Vedha 🥂
I love this story.... It is so lovable 😍.. every character of this story is very impressive[img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]..... 😍❤️😘🤗
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Words are enough to justify the emotions attached to this book what a lovely story d great lessons attached. I really wish best of luck to author[img=recommend]
HEY AUTHOR. Continue this.. You can't just drop it like that. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]