System of Darkness
Author: Neil_Kross
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Ryan an orphan who born in the era of adavance technology and bloodline.
Bloodline is a special power and given by fate .
In this world where Bloodline is eternal . Bloodline decided what your state is .
Will Ryan find out what his fate and destiny is ?.
Ryan born with nothing not even a singal talent . He bully by his classmates but one day two god giving him a chance of changing his fate .
They give him system but why ?
Ryan think why he get system not others .
He will know soon when he walk the path that heaven's decided .
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Update will be continued from July 1st 2022.
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This story really needs some kind of editor or the author to gain some experience writing. I definitely think that it has potential but it still needs more work.
Its a good story but the quality of writing is terrible, some of those sentences where shocking its really needs a editor to male it readable i only made it to chapter 12. if the author fixs the weiting it would great i think