By the Power of Plot Armor!
"I don't want to be the monster that scares bad little children into behaving. I want to be the one they look to when they're in danger. I'm not a weapon pointed at them, I am their shield."
The world lies on the brink of utter chaos. Only the great Protector, Steel Lance, and his relatively few compatriots stand between peace and mutually assured destruction. In the middle of all this, a young student named Amyna Anthropos lives a full and peaceful life. However, he lacks purpose, seeking only to sustain his current way of life. Unlike a great amount of his classmates, Amyna has no power of his own, yet he remains the most optimistic of them all. When he discovers an ancient breastplate bearing the inscription 'Become the Main Character,' he will learn what it means to aspire to something greater.
Nice 👍.....this novel was close to perfection now. The perks of a native speaker sure are the best head start from the others. But ey, they were also learning like us non-native speakers. This sure is captivating. More chaps, please 🙏
Author has a smooth prose style which makes everything flow really well. I liked how much thought went into the origin behind the world building, I really appreciate that kind of detail. Bringing some actual history into it added credibility to the entire story in my opinion. I like that the tone is manages to be somewhat light despite the subject matter. Looking forward to more.
This is awesome, I love the way, the writer has opened the book and how he/she flows with his words. He writing skill is excellent. However, I don't feel the same energy in the synopsis. I think the synopsis has not done justice to the book. Also, the book cover. Please work on the book cover first.
The story is just getting started but it is highly promising. While there are many unanswered questions, the story is following through on a group of young main characters with superpowers. We'll just have to see what the title of the book has to do with the story, and how the opening scene is linked to our main protagonists!
The story has great potential. It has a smooth pace and a well-described synopsis which adds to the great story. I like it a lot! Hope to see more of the good work!
Never expected to be this good. wow! really, receiving such ability this early stage without any hassle has good start but I think having hard work is better. however, as an author myself I understand your feeling. Overall, this work is really great.