Saints & Sinners: The Scourge
Do you ever wonder what it'd be like if the forces of good and evil in our world were more physical?
If the battle between good and evil was something everyone could see...
If you could actually see the sin you hear so much about. What it would be like?
Or the forces of good
What would a society look like if these were more prevalent? Now if you have... You have to read this book. If you haven't, this synopsis must've aroused that interest, so you still need to read this book.
"Welcome home. On the western end of the kingdom lies our dwelling place. Sodom. It is also known as the outer city."
He spread his arms and dark energy flowed out, erecting structures as he spoke. "It encompasses everyone that is a sinner. Within Sodom, there are other tiers.
"The family is the lowest, it is a group of weaker sinners. Then, there are The orders. That is the next level. A family can be promoted to become an order and likewise, an order can fall back to family status. Then the council. That is the highest tier. The councils together form The union.
"The top three councils from the union get promoted to replace the three lowest in the middle city, Nineveh. In the same vein, it continues into the inner city, Babylon, and then, the sacrosanct, Sheol.
"There is no promotion into Sheol and vice versa. That is the dwelling place of the High Council and of course, the Son of Iniquity.
"Promotion or relegation depends mainly on your level of sin and your conversion of others to sinners. As well as power, status, connections and the like.
"There are six levels of sin. The sixth, though, is unattainable. The six of them are divided into two classes, Venial Sin and Mortal Sin. The venial sin branches into the pawns, the sentries, and the sentinels. The mortal sin branches into the sages, the archemages, and the Son of Iniquity.
"To attain higher levels, you have to cultivate your sin in any way possible. There are no rules and only the fittest survive. This," He said, bringing both hands together and collapsing the structures, "Is the S system. Instituted by our leader, to guide us all."
I will echo the other reviews in saying you should really add a synopsis, so people can know what they are getting into when starting the book. Otherwise the writing style is pleasant and the story is interesting. I will keep it in my collection and see how it progresses. Good luck and keep writing!
I haven’t seen many better writers and/or books to be honest. A must read book, a thrilling page turner. Who really needs a synopsis?? The book itself has it all ❤️💯💯
The writing is excellent, and the conversations flow smoothly. The premise is also very intriguing. However if you could break some long paragraphs, I think that will make it much easier to digest the story.
The story is good with an interesting plot. But the biggest flaw I could see was that some paras were too long and were explained complicatedly. The author could've made the paras a bit more simple so that all readers can understand them. Character design is also good. Overall it's a good book. Try giving it a read every one.
Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. Unique. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed, especially the main characters. They fitted their roles. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
Author teasing is fine but not writing a synopsis it's torture. By the way great start, loved the name. Really loved your writing style. Keep it up.
The book is good. It is well written and it's quite enjoyable as well. But I think you really should write a synopsis. It will attract more readers.
Very interesting novel....Literally had me glued to my screens.. Nice work Paris hills!!.... This is a really captivating novel and I recommend it to all