Feng Shaotian was a depressed person living in earth, he had attempted lots of things that might end his life but was futile.
The only way he found to escape his hard life was novels.
A normal day comes when he went to his bed to take rest when something happened that was beyond belief.
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A great synopsis along with a unique plot. It's slow-paced but I'm really enjoying it. The author has taken their time in developing the characters. It's a great book and I'm looking forward to read more of the coming chapters.
So I have seen your work, this sure is good! I thought it was a trial read of qidian novels and soon realised that it was an original author's work..haha..Now I have seen good narrations. The only problem was, it has to be edited in tthe first few chaps (maybe even more). I can see dialogues that doesn't have periods or commas in the end or sometimes has double periods 😂. But still, the story was there so it was still good to read. Thinking that your work has huge potential. Cheers!
Hope you put a review on my novel after reading it for me to know what your thoughts are about this novel. Thank you for all the support everyone.
I like this novel a lot although the little number of chapters, it is my cup of tea novel......................................................................
I like how this story going, especially how the development of characters each. Hahaha, your promise on sypnosis. I hope you keep that 😂😂😂
Hey Author Dazzling Verdict. Although you deleted the chapters and start again, I'm willing to wait for this great story to be finished. I hope this time you'll update chap's even once a week. I kind of missed Ding Bang. So please make a haste and make more Chapters.
I loved the greatness in your work. I loved unique concepts well yours is very rare so I love it as well. It's a very superb word making hehe I hope you keep posting chapters I already added your book to my library
I read the novel and it was good, and it's suited to my taste. it hopes its update frequently thank you author ..............................................
When I read the synopsis I really liked it. The story is developing well. There are very minor mistakes in the writing meaning at least your head won't hurt in an attempt to try to understand.[img=recommend]
Really good! The main character is relatable, and I know this sounds really immature, but I love any story with a dog in it. Your grasp of the English language is pretty good, although, some of the phrases don't translate the best.
woah. this novel is kinda amazing. I hope the next chapter won't disappoint me, can't wait for the next chapter. I hope the author will publish chapter more frequently.
I like the way that story is going and its slow pace and it is different from something that I read about the farmer story and I was going to feel free about reading it more and giving my thoughts when more chapters are added and so I going to make sure that I can keep up to date with this but I going to come back to this story. Keep it up, author.
I really love slow paced and a wholesome, calming, and even somewhat magical farmers or even oddly jobs that have cultivations innit. Although the story is too short for now, I SHALL CONTINUE READING THIS!!! The only points that I could point out was the "Showing" part and the "telling" part. most of the scenes here are telling. For example, the beautiful girl. You could exclude the beautiful part and tell hyow the mc was lured by his curved body (which you did include, and that is terrific!) and onomatopoeia. If you plan on using these onomatopoeias, try to add more narrative innit. It will give the audience or readers a feel from the sound (with adjectives like defeaning, blaring, and so on). kudos for the author~
Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.
The book has a unique plot! Your writing style is good too. There were a few grammatical mistakes though they can be fixed if you proofread them. Overall, great work!