Bhai kya likha hai yrr.....this is really a perfect jo jo lines padhi meine i was able to imagine it.All the best and please iska sequel thoda jaldi release karo.Great supporter
2 years ago
3
Shikari_Rachit
Content is very much interesting but i think you need some word arrangement.Btw it is really a beautiful story.... waiting for the next part,you are having a talent of giving suspense at the end of each part which is really cooll😎👍✨
2 years ago
1
AKASH_AKASH_7029
remembering old day's of mine while reading this..... it's like all the stories are same for all😂.....but got a special feelings about my past
Bhai kya likha hai yrr.....this is really a perfect jo jo lines padhi meine i was able to imagine it.All the best and please iska sequel thoda jaldi release karo.Great supporter
Content is very much interesting but i think you need some word arrangement.Btw it is really a beautiful story.... waiting for the next part,you are having a talent of giving suspense at the end of each part which is really cooll😎👍✨
remembering old day's of mine while reading this..... it's like all the stories are same for all😂.....but got a special feelings about my past