The Sanctuary of the Abyss

The Sanctuary of the Abyss

Fantasy6 Chapters13.4K Views
Author: NightClouds
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Welcome to the world where mystical powers are a normality. If fortunate enough, one can possess either magical or holy power, but never both, for the two powers contradict each other.



Norah Lumen is the youngest professor at the Imperial College of Magic. He is the sole anomaly, with a body perfect for magic and immune from the common weakness of holy power. He has the potential to be the greatest mage in the world, dominating over everyone with no equal. So what shall he do?



Take over the world?



Create a harem?



Gather a cult following?



Sorry, but he can't use magic even though his body is meant to.



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Follow along as we slowly unravel this young man's secrets and figure out his unknown intentions.

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SEP1A
SEP1A

For the first time, I understood what good pacing was. Reading the beginning of Dexter's story, I felt the author's ability to align our pace with their's was alight. I love everything about this novel thus far and can't wait to read more!

4 years ago
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Princess_debbs26
Princess_debbs26

Great story author! The book has a lot of potentials. The synopsis is catchy. The introduction of the MC is also awesome. I look forward to Dexter's story. The author has put in great efforts in this book

4 years ago
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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_sora

Great introductions! And I'm loving it already~ The writing is smooth enough to carry me onto the next chapter of Dexter's stories! I commented down everything that I think needs editting. To sum it up, you could include more "showing" than "telling" especially how much pain Dexter had gone through, how it burns his flesh, and so on. You could also reduce the usage of adverbs and use more active verbs to amplify the descriptions of the story. Besides that, I know this novel is going to be an awesome book in the future!

4 years ago
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Venusean
Venusean

As of now, the novel has just commenced serialization and 4 chapters have been published. However, in these 4 chapters, I could very well see that the story has a lot of potential and the author has put a lot of effort into making this an enjoyable read, as demonstrated by their very good linguistic skills, excellent grammar and frankly, good writing and formatting. FYI, this is the author's first novel so I cannot help but look forward to the future quality of the author's writing as they gain more experience. Give it a read and add it to your collection, everyone! Keep up the great work and good luck!!!

4 years ago
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