Eternal Peace (DxD)

Madara? Sure, the body’s there. The character isn’t. Why do people create stories of people like Madara, Gilgamesh, Escanor, and other people with gigantic egos if they can’t even even portray them for even half of who they are?

If the character was Hashirama instead, it wouldn't be so shocking. This madara is broken. Thank you for writing a novel for me to read. Good luck.

Please post an update to fan fiction so that people will not be confused and think this is copied from that place. Please do not delete this review too. Thank you very much hope you have a good day.

Very good. Блин мне лень писать на английском. В общем автор ты молодец я люблю твою маму за то что она родила тебя.

I knew that this story reminded me of another one? Are you Liquid's Wraith the author of Uchiha Revenge? because it’s same story from fanfiction.net.

Madara indeed. But, it's a retarded one! What do you expect? I honestly read only up to Chapter 3 because I didn't get hooked up even up to that point. It'd be useless for me to force myself read something that I didn't like. So this is what I think for what I've read: 1. The 'Madara' here is supposed to be the Madara from the battle of Shūmatsu no Tani, which means he comes from the time before he becomes the so-called Uchiha no Bōrei. The past conversation he had with Hashirama hinted that he has a change of heart. But, a person's personality can't change in an instant. Things quickly escalated, and I couldn't feel any semblance of Madara anymore. I don't know whether the author doesn't have deep understanding of Madara's character or he purposefully did that for 'originality' purpose, but for it was somehow painful. 2. Writing skill is somewhat average, but the author is definitely better than the worse ones I have seen. Unfortunately, the way he advanced the story seemed all over the place. It's quite understandable, since we're not talking about a professional author here, but I personally would avoid it. 3. The story would be likeable to some, and irritating for some — such as me. But, people have preferences, right? Rather than taking someone's opinion wholly and later mocked them for it, you should have taste for yourself first. Keep scribbling and improving, Author!

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Madara is the best Antagonist I know ..............................................................................................................................

Interesting start so far Yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup

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There is serious character flaws in story as they feel just like a shell with no substance, its like the character has no ideas, their will , etc

Por ahora, ta chido, me gusta :3 Siga con el buen trabajo muchacho, y se cuida , saludos

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personally I like the story it and it's a good fanfiction specially if it's madara one of the best character in Naruto Shippuden(series) even though there are plot holes, there is no such thing with no plot holes. hmm who will be the first and main harem member?