My Doomsday farming truck

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Summary: the hero has a beautiful and strong sister (1 beautiful girl), she saves a beautiful and cute girl as well (2 beautiful girls), the hero saves this beautiful girl and falls in love with him, the hero dies back to the past, he has a neighbor who has a beautiful and cute girl (3 beautiful girls next to the hero) Her father has an accident and then lives with the hero in the same house as it appears that she loves him, again the hero needs a legendary stone that is bought by a beautiful girl with a strong family (4 beautiful girls) She is strong and her bodyguard, how will she give him the stone after saving her lol, but by chance the hero trusts her and often she will give him the stone because he is the hero and she will fall in love with him (stupid clichés) Then this girl finds the hero interesting and tries to delay giving him the stone and so you can expect the direction of this novel, the strange thing is that the hero Before the start of the stupid novel he doesn't have a single girl by his side but after starting the novel he will become a magnet for attracting strong, talented, wealthy girls, and the best women to his love, and that's only in 22 chapters 4 beautiful, talented, cute, intelligent girls from legendary and powerful clans.

my biggest problem with this is that it has info dump after info dump, fillers with only world building one after another. i dont mind having a novel that expands in its world design, but seriously, not even 50 chapters in, you havent even let the mc get in his mobile base, and youre focusing on world building already? this story should focus on the mc and his mobile base not on some other side characters family background and entire history as well as their ideals and revelations. not to mention there isnt even a proper frame work or general understanding in the world yet youre already sweating the small details. its so borimg and repetetive and im not even in the 50 chapter mark yet. priorities author, priorities.

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Good story if you want to read a good story its worth reading although the story takes too long to really start. More like the first 40 chapters are prologue but it really introduce the characteristics of the MC

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I haven't read it yet as I plan to in the morning but it looks promising. Just trying to help an author out with his reviews. EXP EXP EXP EXP. also do you plan to go with locked chaps? as this is your first novel.

The book is good but if you ate the typr of perosn Eho like thing that go first like ptelaring and not do much details of everything that eill take a lot of cHapter this is not for you. you sill be bored m

good story, solid characters, entertaining read. [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

At first i thought i found good novel. i mean it has good plot and greatworld building , what kill this story is info dumping. The point is the story is filled with unecessary information. side characters

ok

grammar is so bad like mtl bad .....i mean basid editing or if english is not your strong point .......ask google for help haaaaa i couldnt go past firstfew chaps very crude writting

AMAZING story it can be a little slow in the beginning and if that didnt happen it would be 5 stars love it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]