ayo broth if you are reading this don't drop this flipping fanfic send him to anime or novel, manga, manhwa, manhua. if you want to just don't drop this!
4 years ago
13
WhiteWarlock
Please continue, so far Im loving the idea, how you made Fresh, and Im honestly exited at what he will dk next, will he be good or bad, just explore and do nothing? Or meaby find so.e big secret about AUs? Also wondering what would happen if he meets any Gasters or other characters like flowery or chara. Overall, amazing, must read, trust me, I too was skeptical at first, thinking whether this was good or bad, but now having read it I can confidently say that it is amazing with a great original plot forming. Keep up the good work author.
3 years ago
7
TBoyKey_Hoang
I got give you 5 star because it is a new undertale fan-fiction . Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
The FitnessGram PACER Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues.
The test is used to measure a student's aerobic capacity as part of the FitnessGram assessment. Students run back and forth as many times as they can, each lap signaled by a beep sound. The test get progressively faster as it continues until the student reaches their max lap score.
The PACER Test score is combined in the FitnessGram software with scores for muscular strength, endurance, flexibility and body composition to determine whether a student is in the Healthy Fitness Zone™ or the Needs Improvement Zone™.
So this is a good story :)
you definitely have talent I recommend you keep writing although you have room to improve but doesn't everybody. I can safely say as well you are much better than me so keep it up.
Me: ''Yoo brudda you have a lil rad story you got there, am lovin it and you know it!! but i lil bit of chapters would be SOO cool of ya bruh''
2 years ago
0
requiembob
An undertale novel that hasn't been dropped on it's head, that's the basic summary of this novel. I hate the word count so much, like, bro, this is a genuine death grudge against a web novel feature. My use of commas are beyond your understanding.
3 years ago
0
Dark_Soulsbestgame
Good stuff
3 years ago
0
CodexZero
this is extremely fun and entertaining to read please write more chapter bro
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ayo broth if you are reading this don't drop this flipping fanfic send him to anime or novel, manga, manhwa, manhua. if you want to just don't drop this!
Please continue, so far Im loving the idea, how you made Fresh, and Im honestly exited at what he will dk next, will he be good or bad, just explore and do nothing? Or meaby find so.e big secret about AUs? Also wondering what would happen if he meets any Gasters or other characters like flowery or chara. Overall, amazing, must read, trust me, I too was skeptical at first, thinking whether this was good or bad, but now having read it I can confidently say that it is amazing with a great original plot forming. Keep up the good work author.
I got give you 5 star because it is a new undertale fan-fiction . Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
This one is SANSATION and SANS approves
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The FitnessGram PACER Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The test is used to measure a student's aerobic capacity as part of the FitnessGram assessment. Students run back and forth as many times as they can, each lap signaled by a beep sound. The test get progressively faster as it continues until the student reaches their max lap score. The PACER Test score is combined in the FitnessGram software with scores for muscular strength, endurance, flexibility and body composition to determine whether a student is in the Healthy Fitness Zone™ or the Needs Improvement Zone™. So this is a good story :)
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you definitely have talent I recommend you keep writing although you have room to improve but doesn't everybody. I can safely say as well you are much better than me so keep it up.
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Me: ''Yoo brudda you have a lil rad story you got there, am lovin it and you know it!! but i lil bit of chapters would be SOO cool of ya bruh''
An undertale novel that hasn't been dropped on it's head, that's the basic summary of this novel. I hate the word count so much, like, bro, this is a genuine death grudge against a web novel feature. My use of commas are beyond your understanding.
Good stuff
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