Blood Lust An Undying Thirst
When Rhiannon, Dominic, and their mum Suzanne, move to Helgrey, their mothers past comes back to haunt her, in the form of her sister, Clarissa. While Rhiannon's going about her normal daily life, an unknown man asks to be invited in, claiming to be a friend of her new aunty, Clarissa. But that's when everything changes, and she's thrown into a world of unknown. When Rhiannon invites the man in, she's filled with terror, when in one fell swoop, the man grabs her by the neck, using her as a hostage.
"Clarissa, I know you're here. Did you really think you could hide from me?" The man's voice sounded throughout the house, his icy grasp still gripping my neck.
Suddenly, mum and Clarissa rushed in from the backdoor. "Don't you dare hurt her," Clarissa demanded as she stopped metres away from Markus and me.
Markus just scoffs in response, gently caressing my neck. "Oh, I won't. Not yet anyway," Markus says with a wicked smile. "But who knows; maybe I might get peckish."
This is overall really amazing. The way you give vivid and concise descriptions is truly masterful. The story and all the characters seem to be very well written. The only complaint I have is that it seemed rather too quick. The story progressed at light speed at the next chapters, but nevertheless, Amazing work author.
You have a way with words which makes each read seem seamles, continuing from one sentence to the next and with that you've created a picture so descriptive that is so visible on each read. A great starting point , you've maintained the amusement for the reader not to get bored while reading ensuring that they continue exploring this fantasy world you've built. Overall a great book
This is my first time reading a vampire genre novel, and I found it quite interesting with a lot of suspense, but you should try to make your story a little bit simpler as I was confused at times because you did a lot of scenes at the same time in the same chapter, and now I'll tell you the biggest problem, I need more chapter.
Great story, even better characters. The world feels so alive, from the characters to the environments to the objects. If it were a game, I would call the world very lived in. And the characters are just so unique.
I'm not gonna talk about the vampire or what-not but what I wanna point out is the characters just by reading how they react to each other, to the world, and their problems. I absolutely liked the detail of the story feeling like it relentlessly pulls you back in just to read again.
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All the characters in the novel are well thought and put properly. The element of mystery the story gives in starting chapters is awesome. The way you have written can only be described is amazing
This story is something else, when I began reading it, I just couldn't stop myself... I love the Rhi character and also Dominic. oh my, what wonderful siblings they are. 🥺 I love the way they would move on with their life despite losing Tina. .. I just love everything about the story; its flow, well-constructed grammar.[img=recommend]
Its definitely the novel for those who are into vampires overall its an excellent novel not really much to pick on at least in my opninion anyway author good job keep pumping out those chapters
what I love about your book is how well their emotions are described at times I feel it's happening to me, and I also love how the story started out interestingly
I honestly love the way you write and describe. The prologue itself brought alarming sounds. The storyline also is different and new. I want more chapters author. Keep going ...Great Job🤩👌
The writing could be more polished, but it has very vivid descriptions and strong characters. Each chapter raises questions that make you want to keep reading.
This novel is splendid! The writing style is amazing, the descriptions are flawless and the story progresses smoothly. I really love the humor too. You have expressed the sibling relationship quite nicely...and accurately! You are an amazing writer. Waiting for updates.
Love the word choice, and how you put everything together. While also not using words that are too complex, and making the reader lose focus. Overall I just really like this story...
The author is able to portray a teenage girl (and the awkwardness that comes with it) to the dot. It's well written but the story simply isn't my cup of tea. Characters are well written, but there are a few times where that action and dialogs don't match, but that's my view. Read it and see for yourselves.